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Title: A Not-So-Cheerful Birthday 14 Feb 2012 9:36 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved this chapter, especially the flashbacks! The birthday scene with little Harry was heartbreaking. And poor Sev... if Lily had only kept her promise, as he kept his.

    As for moments I'd like to see, perhaps Harry could get sick, and Sev do his best to help him? I'd also love to see Ripper scared to death (well, not literally) of cat-Snape ;).

    Lovely story, thank you for writing!
Title: A Not-So-Cheerful Birthday 14 Feb 2012 8:08 am
Reviewer: lastcrazyhorn (Signed) [Report This]
    I suppose you modelled the business dinner like the one in the second book? I thought for a second that you had gotten your years mixed up, but I think the names are different, so it's okay. :)

    Still intrigued, still wondering if Snape will have to intervene . . .

    Author's Response:

    Haha, yeah I used that line because I wanted Severus to hear it. However, with the recited manner Harry said it in the book/film I imagined that it would apply to any company the Dursleys ever have to their house in which they would consider important.

    Thanks for your review! 

Title: A Not-So-Cheerful Birthday 14 Feb 2012 7:50 am
Reviewer: slashypotterness (Signed) [Report This]
    Another great chapter!!! Hope you read more soon.
Title: A Cold Night in July 11 Feb 2012 4:16 am
Reviewer: loretta537 (Signed) [Report This]
    this is a good story
Title: The Journey Begins 20 Jan 2012 5:54 pm
Reviewer: MoiraRClip (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah, I love this! I'm excited to read this story. :)
Title: A Cold Night in July 19 Jan 2012 5:27 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the chapter especially Sev the cat's musings thnk you
Title: The Journey Begins 19 Jan 2012 2:20 pm
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) [Report This]
    Brilliant plot idea and I love your choice of name for cat Severus; very clever :)
Title: A Cold Night in July 17 Jan 2012 8:29 pm
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely love this story, please update soon.
Title: A Cold Night in July 17 Jan 2012 7:46 pm
Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed) [Report This]
    beautiful I can't wait to read more sev is defintly getting a wake up call
Title: A Cold Night in July 17 Jan 2012 5:38 pm
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    I am awaiting eagerly to see what happens next! This was a great chapter! I love that Harry protected the cat from abuse, and that Severus' perceptions are changing as well.

    I wonder how Dumbledore will react to what Severus shows him in the pensive - or will he tell him instead?

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

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