Well, from the looks of it, Severus is not much guilty for what he did to Harry. He is guilty because the two people he cared about are now disappointed in him, Dumbledore and Lily.
You shouldn't have abandoned this story. I am writing a story on ff.net and I have got only about 30 reviews, but you have got above 40 and still aren't updating? How ungrateful. This story has quite a lot of potential. Either you take down this story or continue it. Good and abandoned stories are a lot worse than bad but complete or in process stories.
Well, that was dramatic. *phew*
Oddly, I was smiling like a maniac throughout the chapter. Maybe he will have hearing problem? Or paralysis due to brain Haemorrhage? A really nice twist to the usual stories.You can add the challenge 'Snape Rage'. This story meets the requirements.
I did not expect him to go completely mental on Harry like that. Poor Harry.
Any chance of continuation? This really has the bones for a great story
Oh! This is so different from everything else. I wish there was more.
You have to update this!! It's so gripping!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 16 Jun 2015 10:54 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I hope you will eventually update this story. Such an interesting premise.
I agree that Dumbledore is partially at fault for (1) never stopping James' and Sirius' bullying and (2) allowing Severus to treat Harry the way he has.
That said, Severus made a choice to always see Harry as James, from the time Harry was 11. If Severus had consciously seen Harry as his own person, then I don't think this could have happened.
What will happen when Harry wakes up? Will he have memory loss? Some type of disability? Dumbledore said there was probably permanent damage. That ringing in the ears was quite telling. Will he have hearing loss?
And WHAT will Sirius do when he finds out???
| Title: Chapter 2
| 26 Apr 2014 4:36 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Please please please update! Great use of emotion here, i like how Snape is mostly centered in this, unlike other fan fictions.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 26 Apr 2014 4:34 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Please please please update! Great use of emotion here, i like how Snape is mostly centered in this, unlike other fan fiction s.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 29 Sep 2013 8:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous)
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Awesome start. Please continue this story!!!
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