| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Apr 2011 5:04 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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OH my god Poor Harry Sev finally cracked can they work togewther after this I do not think harry would trust him... More please thank you.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Apr 2011 8:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Shira (Anonymous)
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Whooow... Snape really lost it .___. Poor Harry, I am really curious how Severus wants to fix this 'little' mishap. And how will the others react? Will Snape be fired, since he almost killed a student?
>__< wahh i am curious!!
Please update soon :D
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Apr 2011 7:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Courtney (Anonymous)
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So good! I don't think there is a story you've written that I haven't enjoyed!
Nice, scary start.
Wondering how Severus is going to stay out of Azkaban.
Just one question (because I'm a little obsessive compulsive about these details)It's not clear how long the seizure is; is it one long seizure or several short ones?
I wanted to reach in and start assisting the child's breathing myself--a compliment to the amount of tension you built up in the scene.
Anyway, I enjoyed it.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Apr 2011 6:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Duck (Anonymous)
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I always like the idea of something like ths happening to Harry in the occlumency lessons! I enjoyed this chapter and wait in anticipation for future chapters!
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