Whoo!! Great reveal! I love it! I wonder what Snape and Harry are going to do. Stay and help? I suppose they have to if they need to get back home. Very intriguing story line! I wish that there were more descriptions though, of the original characters and the cave they are in. I feel like I know some things, but not really what everything looks like. I loved how Harry eavesdropped and then got caught. Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I will try to put in more description. I guess I've been getting a little carried away with all the other details.
Ooooo...nice twist! Can't wait for the next chapter! Hope you did well on your tests :D
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review and well wishes!
Title: The Invention
| 23 Apr 2011 1:56 pm
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Reviewer: Shadow (Anonymous)
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Very interesting chapter, I'm looking forward the next one =o)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I'm figuring that powder from the ball Harry found in the first chapter? Kudos. Glad I gave this chapter a try.
Author's Response: Good guess ... and you shall find out if it is correct in the next chapter. Bwa ha ha! Anyways, thank you for reviewing!
Title: The Time Slip
| 18 Apr 2011 9:15 pm
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Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Fun idea. I'm glad you've moved quickly to the story.
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Woohoo!! Great! I love the build up. great descriptions and characterizations of Snape and Harry. The original characters seem real and well rounded. I loved Snape's knowledge and explanations about things. I wonder what their visit to the past is going to be like. Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! :)
its the ball right?
Author's Response: You'll see! ;)
Oh wow...you got me traveling! Looking forward!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: The Time Slip
| 17 Apr 2011 10:36 am
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Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I can't wait to read what happens next!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Awesomeness!! I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes ^^ Nice idea with the vanishing sickness too, very creative ^^
Author's Response: Thanks sproutchild!
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