Title: February 23 – March 2, 1997
| 13 Aug 2011 10:18 pm
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Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed)
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An absolutely wonderful chapter. And when you quoted "Bring Him Home" from Les Miz, you really got me. And you got me again with the last line of the chapter too. *sniffle*
I have really enjoyed reading this story, and I hope that your muse continues to give you such marvelous ideas and words to describe them.
Well done!
Title: February 18 – February 20, 1997
| 08 Aug 2011 5:33 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely you re so inventive especially with their questions to each other thnk you
Title: February 18 – February 20, 1997
| 06 Aug 2011 4:55 pm
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Reviewer: dorothy (Anonymous)
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teehee, wonderful as always! i am impressed by the speed and quality of your updates, keep up the excellent work!
Title: February 18 – February 20, 1997
| 06 Aug 2011 10:19 am
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Reviewer: Xedra (Signed)
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hahahahaha this was a certainly interesting chapter it was funny to read :D lol nyways plz update soon!
I absolutely LOVED Moment of Impact, and I must say this sequel doesn't disappoint! Your writing style is such a joy to read, and the way you alternate the regular with the epistles shows Harry and Snape's voices really well. And I love your whirlwind chapters! :D
Your use of symbolism and imagery is excellent, and I love all the questions Harry and Snape ask each other in their letters - what a great way to learn more about each other! I love how you're developing Harry and Snape's bond, from reconciliation to mentor to parent, and it's just so beautiful and touching. The Animagus chapters were exquisite. Your blending of HBP canon with the added Harry-Severus bond is ingenious and so well executed it's becoming my personal head canon, and I love how you alternate serious events with humor, like Ron beating Severus in chess but then Severus became hula hoop king - that one had me laughing for ages! :D
This chapter with the hog castration was hilarious! Not something you'd see everyday but definitely a creative and most enlightening detention! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Title: February 12 – February 15, 1997
| 04 Aug 2011 1:18 am
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Reviewer: Xedra (Signed)
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Are you kidding me??? Just when I think this fic can't get any better, you come up with chapters like this. This has become one of my very favorite HP fics. Definitely in my Top Ten - and I don't mean just Harry/Snape fics. I mean in my top ten of every HP related fic I've read EVER. *nods*
Author's Response: Thanks. That's nice....very nice....because there are some really good authors out there. I'll try not to disappoint!
this was a really nice chapter please keep up the good wrk and update soon!
Title: February 2 – February 8, 1997
| 31 Jul 2011 12:43 am
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Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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I really love your story, and the part about learning to apparate, brilliant. The part about the twins, Hermione, and a Draco crushed by a headless body, too funny. Great chapter.
Author's Response: I always thought it odd that in the HP series, you can "undo" a serious splinching--reconnect legs and other body parts. So I thought...why not the head? Thanks for reviewing! Always appreciated.
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