| Title: Chapter 4
| 30 Apr 2011 8:30 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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I'm glad that Harry isn't living in the cupboard anymore. Did Dumbledore modify the Dursley's memories? They don't seem like the types to change their minds unless there has been a display of force. I'm glad Severus was there to comfort Harry, even if it was awkward for him.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 30 Apr 2011 7:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Chelle (Anonymous)
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Interesting beginning to your story. I love Harry's and Snape's correspondence. It is sweet and a different way for them to develop an inevitable relationship (at least I hope it's inevitable). Your chapter end notes had me laughing out loud...the sad part is that now with auto-correct feature on its just as easy to make similar mistakes even when we do know better. I am looking forward to their next correspondence (also thanks for keeping Snape in character though Dumbledore's manipulation is already starting to annoy me.)
HEHEHE!
I loved the letters! Snape Obviously has no clue how to write to a young child-he's lucky harry had the where-with-all to use a dictionary to figrue those letters out.
Thanks for the update.
V.
Great story, I really like your writing style! The letters made me laugh out loud, I hope Harry and Snape continue their correspondence for a while. It's so like Severus to include a homework assignment in his reply, and so like Harry to ask Snape to come over and play.
Looking forward to more,
Sita
| Title: Chapter 3
| 30 Apr 2011 2:20 am
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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Good chapter! I loved the letters. It was really cute when Harry asked Snape to be his friend. Silly Severus using such big words in a letter for an eight year old. On the plus side, Harry will have improved his vocabulary greatly from reading the letters. I laughed when I read your little note about the unfortunate misspelling of the title "Princess Gold". I have a friend who's spelling blunder is just is bad actually. When she was in grade one they had to write out recipes, and she did peanut butter cookies. Unfortunately my friend titled the recipe ( in all her six year old wisdom) "Penist buttr cookies". Anyways, enough rambling on my part. I am looking forward to the next chapter!
Too funny about the spelling. That chapter had me sniffling for a moment. The poor kid hardly makes it to school--it's no wonder he can barely read and write.
I hope Severus sucks it up and reads the letter anyhow.
poor harry. i can't really work up any empathy for severus right now...
| Title: Chapter 3
| 29 Apr 2011 10:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Romanticide (Anonymous)
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I love this story. Will Lucy play a part in it anymore?
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