*snickers* That was awesome. It does seem rather short-sighted of the Ministry and Madam Pomfrey not to take into account the children who are under-weight, but...that is rather typical of the MoM, isn't it? I love their food choices...so healthy! ;)
this is too cool! I loved it
It's Severus' luck that he would choose the same time as Harry to sneak into the kitchen for food...
Great little story; I loved Snape's choice of "forbidden food", and Harry's ruminations on the quality of bacon. Although I do understand Pomfrey and her co-conspirators, to a degree... Hogwarts food *is* mostly grease and sugar, which would be quite a disaster with over-eating kids. I always wondered if they never serve salad or perhaps pasta instead of fatty meat dishes... oh well, enough rambling.
Thanks for writing and posting, I really enjoyed it!
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And I wonder... Will there be an exercise sequel?
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| 04 May 2011 11:44 pm
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LOL! Thank you for the story. Loved the descriptios and the dialogue. And, oh, diet, yeah... who said that healthy tastes nice? :)
Funny! I liked how Snape was stopped right in his tracks when Dobby said that his cake was ready. His comment about the bran was quite hilarious too, and I couldn't help but laugh at the comparison with the flavour of bran to twigs. I quite agree! Oh, just so you know, you don't need to put the end, as it automatically does that if you've checked the little completed box.
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