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Title: Pulling Strings 18 May 2011 4:56 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you I liked the way you are not having Harry friends with Ron it makes it more interesting

    Author's Response:

    You're most welcome.

    They won't be enemies though. They'll have a rather turbulent relationship... :)

     --Alis Syn

Title: Pulling Strings 18 May 2011 4:26 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    *giggles* I was wondering if you were going to have Harry on Slyth's team. Good on Marcus for stepping up and asking Snape to make an "exception to the rules" for the sake of the team.

    I'm really liking how you have Blaise. It'll be interesting to see how the relationships start to stabilize as term progresses.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you!

     Yeah, I figured Harry still needed that Quidditch element. And thanks! Blaise is a little difficult to portray. Hope I'm doing him justice!

    --Alis Syn

Title: Flying High 18 May 2011 3:47 pm
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Good for Harry for getting Draco to agree to visiting Hagrid. Very Slytherin of him. :-)

    I'm glad that he told Snape what had happened even though it was obvious he didn't want to.

    My fave part of this chapter was Harry's comment - “No! Nothing excuses me… Just thought you should know the whole story.” Well done.
Title: Pulling Strings 18 May 2011 2:33 pm
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Um, why is the conversation between Severus and McGonagall right aligned? Also, "smash the growings..." sounds kind of odd. Ron could at least given Harry a chance to explain before nullifying the truce. Can't wait for more!

    Author's Response:

    I right-align whenever I do a "flashback" scene. For some reason, I like how it looks. :)

     Don't worry, there's a Harry and Ron confrontation coming up.

    --Alis Syn

Title: Pulling Strings 18 May 2011 11:43 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Anonymous) [Report This]
    love this story. more please!
Title: Flying High 18 May 2011 7:47 am
Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I think you meant to say "He wasn't even sure he could fly yet." Can't wait to read more.
Title: Flying High 18 May 2011 6:14 am
Reviewer: Liz (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another one of those "pick your loyalties and conform to stereotypes because else the entire plot of this story is gone".
    No matter how well written it is, it's overdone, and in my opinion, boring - but obviously, that is very subjective.
Title: Loyalties Lie 11 May 2011 5:42 pm
Reviewer: frenchy (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Woah ! I'm impressed, so much suspense ! I wanted a slytherin-harry fic , I mean a good one, and I've found it !

    thank you for this fic.

    frenchy
Title: Loyalties Lie 11 May 2011 4:28 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad ou have not made Ron the enemy I'm sure this is a more realistic story line. Thank you for updating
Title: Loyalties Lie 11 May 2011 8:36 am
Reviewer: p_stotts (Signed) [Report This]
    Well, Malfoy's a snotty little toerag, isn't he? Good chapter.

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