Oh. This was really touching and written with such grace. Thanks for your story.
Dear Sir,
This lovely letter-story made me weep.
Won't say why; Mr. Alan R. told us to think about the next reader. He was, is so right.
Hope that you are okay in the midst of
Omega and strife. Unsettling times.
Wonder what S.Snape. would have thought?
Please consider writing more stories here. They are thought-full and earthy and kind, with a natural flow, and I like discovering your themes.
Best regards, ARim
Wow, a brilliant ending! This was certainly unexpected!
Wow. I did not expect that at all. Lol I love this and I think you should definately continue it in a series. I want to know more about Severus and how he reacts to finding out about his godfather.
Peace!
CheyRain
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| 26 Jun 2011 12:08 am
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| Reviewer: Eliza (Anonymous)
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A very sweet story. I love how you portrayed Albus Severus... er, Severus Albus... whatever.
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| 22 May 2011 5:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely story I wish theis had been the ending thank you
Amazing! What a twist at the end! I wondered that you had invented a relative, but I had never even thought that it would turn out to be Severus! Very well done!
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