Title: Deliver My Letter Please, Hedwig?
| 28 May 2011 10:51 pm
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Reviewer: reader (Anonymous)
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Your title would be better as "Please Deliver My Letter, Hedwig!" Grammar is a tricky thing! Change the title please and it will be a nice story.
Author's Response: lol - well, as the title is dragged directly from the dialogue in the fic spoken by a 15/16 year old boy - mid sentence to boot - I would hope that you might see past such a finicky error. It's still a nice story, despite it's title, surely?
Thanks for your comments, but I won't be changing the title.
misundersnape...