| Title: Day two - Tuesday, third of September
| 07 Jul 2011 6:59 am
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| Reviewer: Yvln (Signed)
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I love the Idea of the story ! Can't wait to read next chapter
| Title: Day two - Tuesday, third of September
| 06 Jul 2011 11:44 pm
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| Reviewer: Tempest in Blue (Anonymous)
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LOVE this story. I can't wait for more.
| Title: Day two - Tuesday, third of September
| 06 Jul 2011 4:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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You have a most intriguing and well-devised story here. I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. THere are a few spots where your choice of words is a little awkward but it is not so distracting that it interferes with me reading the story. I think you are doing very well since English is not your first language. Thank you for being brave enough to share your story with us native English speakers. I have taken 4 years of German in school but I don't think I could possibly write a story in German that would be readable. So bravo and here's a box of virtual chocolate frogs!
It's great.I cant wait for the rest ;)
| Title: Day two - Tuesday, third of September
| 05 Jul 2011 11:59 am
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| Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed)
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Love it. Well worth reading a second time :D Update soon
| Title: Day one - Monday, second of September
| 01 Jul 2011 6:32 pm
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| Reviewer: SteveSettler (Anonymous)
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You have changed a few things, haven't you? Just minor things I noticed, a few mistakes you have corrected. That makes the story even better this time and yes - I do agree with Jean, this story is worth being read a second time.
| Title: Day one - Monday, second of September
| 01 Jul 2011 6:30 pm
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| Reviewer: JeanMcIory (Anonymous)
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even if reading it a second time, it's so very great to read this again and you surely can't say this from all stories out there!
| Title: Day one - Monday, second of September
| 24 Jun 2011 5:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you excellent writing and very taught plot thank you
| Title: Day one - Monday, second of September
| 23 Jun 2011 3:38 am
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| Reviewer: bfn (Anonymous)
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Great chapter. I really like your story thus far, and look forward to seeing what will happen next. Keep up the good work.
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