“Harry vomited a little in his mouth.” — so funny!
| Title: Marked By Death
| 01 Feb 2013 9:05 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Um...silly question but what happened to Draco, Bellatrix and the rest of the death eaters in the room when Snape cast the avada kedava curse? Otherwise the piece was well written and quite captivating.
| Title: Marked By Death
| 09 Aug 2011 7:24 am
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| Reviewer: Rhea (Signed)
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That was... um.. a bit strange, but I like it nonetheless)
Author's Response: lol. Thank you. :). "A bit strange" is my writers niche. ;). Thank you, for reviewing.
loved this.I always felt sorry for Sev...double spy and killing Dumbles ETC.
fav part: "thats...just...stupid." poor Harry.
Author's Response: lol. Thank you so much for the review. :). I loved writing that moment. ;).
Nice. I would like a sequel with what would happen with the new scar. And if Dumbleydore would really die. All in All great Story!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading the story and I look forward to possibly exploring this universe a little bit more in the future.
| Title: Marked By Death
| 12 Jul 2011 5:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Jada Ryl (Anonymous)
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Dude! :-) This needs a sequel! It's an awesome idea and well written, but I want to see the aftermath. There's got to be some serious fall out. Perhaps the link could work the opposite way this time? Like Snape seeing into Harry's mind?
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a great review. :). I'm glad you liked it...and I wouldn't be against writing a sequel if I get the urge. . .currently feeling rather blocked in this universe.
Thanks for taking my challange! I loved it! I also love how Harry seems to be the sanest one in this fic that just captures the instanity of HBP!
Author's Response: I know, right!? lol. I'm glad that you liked it. That totally makes my day. ;). It was insanely fun to write. :D. More to come if I have a chance.
| Title: Marked By Death
| 09 Jul 2011 8:57 pm
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| Reviewer: wynnleaf (Anonymous)
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Quite fascinating! Of course, if Dumbledore and Harry's trip to the cave had occurred on a different night from Draco letting in the Death Eaters, we'd still have had Dumbledore calling for Snape. So there would be Dumbledore, Harry, and Snape together. And Dumbledore obviously did want Snape to win mastery of the Elder Wand - which in this story, Snape now has done (he must have disarmed Dumbledore), and yet Dumbledore is still alive. An interesting quandary.
I do wonder - what exactly makes "The End" as opposed to "Not Finished"? It doesn't seem anything like a story with any sort of end, more like just a bitten off bite of a longer story. Perhaps you could finish it?
Author's Response: Yeah. I want to continue it, but I have to figure out a few details first. I was hitting too many blocks so I decided to end it there for now and write a sequel later once I've got it all figured. Thank you so much for such a great review. :D
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