| Title: The Truth
| 30 Jul 2011 5:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Emily (Anonymous)
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Crying so much right now! This is beautiful :O
I think you should continue so we can see what those two will write each other. Or at least to see if Sev can keep the boy wonder from falling into that depression that is obvious in the books. Please write more of this story or another soon!
I really enjoyed reading this! It was emotional and yet touching, Severus was right on all levels, and it was good for him to tell Harry the truth about everything. Keeping the kid in the dark was what led to so many misunderstandings between him and Snape.
I liked how Harry accepted him and hope that they will write to each other over break, they both need each other.
| Title: The Truth
| 26 Jul 2011 7:51 am
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| Reviewer: Vanitas (Anonymous)
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I have read the one that on Fanfiction.net . I admit I like the fist one and is looking forward of it update,so I don't mind to have a improve version. Please continue this story....Do you keep the one that on Fanfiction.net? Even you say it no you best work,I still love to read it sometime.Will the new version of this story on Fanfiction.net?
Author's Response: I am not completely sure if the updated version will be on fanfiction.net, if everyone on here likes it enough I will transfer it over :)
Sounds like a good start to me! Hope that you continue it... Is the other one still up on fanfiction? I like to read before and after's. Lol. Anywho, this was good! I hope Sev and Harry grow closer!
Author's Response: As a matter of fact it is, and it has the same title. Please don't judge me though lol...I wrote that when I was young and foolish ;)
| Title: The Truth
| 25 Jul 2011 11:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Emma (Anonymous)
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It did move a little quickly but you said it would. I like it and would enjoy seeing it continued.
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