| Title: A Forgotten Vision
| 27 May 2015 1:39 pm
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| Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed)
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It's a shame you abandoned this story, its really good.
I cannot wait to see how Harry reacts to that little information bomb. Just curious does Sev realize that Harry isn't spoiled. At one point in this story he made a nasty comment about Tuny and her attitude, but later he calls Harry spoiled. Is that is way of getting a rise out of the boy or does he actually think he is spoiled?
Looking forward to more!!
I like the storyline but I feel like snape is tooo OOC
| Title: The Hovel
| 09 Aug 2011 3:13 am
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| Reviewer: Wandacarla (Anonymous)
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Very intriguing. I can't wait to see where you go with this story. I hope to see an update soon (:
| Title: The Hovel
| 07 Aug 2011 3:32 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting and very good how Severus handled Lucius, IC, thank you
Love this, update soon. I wanna see Harry and snape in their polyjuiced forms LOL
I wonder if their "disguises" are the complete opposite of them . For example snape is thin so his "disguise" has a bit of a pudge... Lol
Can't wait.
Lovely, can't wait to see what happens next!
Sneaky Sev! I like! So its interesting to see Harry in awe and feeling so inadequete compared to Snape. The poor boy does not even seem to realize that he has never been trained to do half the things that Snape can. Hopefully Snape can work on his self worth right? Great story, looking forward to more!
| Title: The Hovel
| 31 Jul 2011 10:26 pm
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| Reviewer: Kristi (Anonymous)
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You meant "don disguises" and not "dawn". Also, "leeway" and not "leave way". I am interested in seeing where you go with this story.
Um... apparating from within Hogwarts is not possible because of the wards.
And they could use Dobby to deliver messages after he promises not to tell ANYONE where they are.
Author's Response: Apparating can happen on the grounds of Hogwarts if the wards are manipulated. Dumbledore and Harry apparated off of Hogwarts grounds in the sixth book, and although Snape isn't Dumbledore I believe him to be smart enough to find a way to manipulate the wards to let him. Also, I didn't choose Dobby as a secret keeper because I don't think he would trust Snape enough to keep a secret for him, especially if Dumbledore manipulated Dobby into thinking that Snape was actually taking Harry to harm him or hand him over to Voldemort
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