Yay! A new chapter! Can't wait for more.
Oh, that's gunna be a long talk...! Yay! A new chapter - just enough to move the story forward - now they've BOTH seen her, woop! Thank you for another chapter!
Please please please update again soon!
I really like your idea for this story. It's a well-worn idea with a twist.
I really can't wait for the next part. Maybe it will be a bit longer? Please?
:D
Author's Response: I am working on longer chapters. I know as a reader, I hate short chapters/stories because I read so fast that a 1200 word chapter is over in 30 seconds so I really hate that I am doing that to my readers!
Awesome chapter! I loved the Potions class and Lily's messages to Snape!
Author's Response: Thanks, this was the chapter I was really looking forward to writing!
Still going well. I love Lily! She's doing great things. I'm having fun reading your story.
Definitely interesting. I love your Snape and Lily's intervention. I'm glad I found your story.
Looks interesting. You write well, which is half the battle, and the premise is great. I'm heading to chapter two with high expectations.
Author's Response: Thank you, I am glad you think I write well. I am really trying improve my creative writing so it is nice to hear that I am not failing entirely!
| Title: Chapter 4
| 18 Aug 2011 9:12 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter thank you so much!
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