Severus is SO sneaky and Umbitch had no idea how much trouble she was actually in. I love it! I felt really bad for Harry when he went to his final torture session (can't really call it detention) thinking that he had been betrayed by yet another adult, but the set up was necessary, I suppose. I am sure that Harry wishes that they had warned him, though. And just to show that a good deed brings a good reward, Severus got the job he truly wanted. Great little 2 shot!
Great chapter; I love your manipulative Severus and how he set up the ambush. The final scene between Harry and Snape felt very in character and I really enjoyed the ending ^^
Wow. This is impressive. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
Poor Harry! I think his reluctance to accept help shows how little help he could expect from the Dursleys when he was a young child. I also liked Snape's thought that he, too, isn't innocent when it comes to torturing Harry.
Great story, I'm lokking forward to the second part!
Great beginning; all the characters felt very in character and I loved the sense of time you created when Harry was hesitating over telling Snape about the blood quill. Snape's internal monologue felt very real and hinted at a change for the better.
OH wow! I am hooked! Great job!
I love this. Overprotective Snape is awesome especially if he is mad @ someone for picking on Harry. I hope Umbridge gets what's coming to her and more. Love your writing style. Keep up the awesome work. LES
I hope that Severus hangs Umbitch up by her toes and hexes her silly!
Great story! Poor Harry. He's so used to dealing with everything on his own and he's really never had anyone he could turn to with his problems. I'm glad Severus has realized what's happening. I love protective Sev!
| Title: Helping Hands
| 26 Aug 2011 11:51 am
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| Reviewer: Xedra (Signed)
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Ooh this is good! Can't wait to read more. :)
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