see now he just told you. now you need to get him out of there!!!! this was a really great chapter. thank you. :)
Interesting that the current Severus is stern but not the same venomous teacher he was when Harry was in school. Of course, he no longer has to keep up a facade for his spying. That must be a relief.
I like that various family members are telling the stories. This one was a more serious one so it seems we will be getting a nice variety. Just a little aside, it should be "his curiosity was piqued."
| Title: The Stories You Never Heard About Grandpa Sev
| 08 Mar 2014 10:30 pm
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| Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed)
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I love the idea of an Easter wand hunt for the students remaining at Hogwarts. What a neat idea. Framing it as a story for the kids was a fun way of presenting it, too. Looking forward to more memories!
| Title: Severus' Story
| 08 Mar 2014 6:07 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Me encantan tus personajes y como lo estas manejando,
como estas poniendo cada uno de los detalles de la historia es sin duda es una historia fascinante
espero puedas actualizar pronto
| Title: Severus' Story
| 08 Mar 2014 4:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Fantastic chapter, could Severus help with Umbridge?
| Title: Dinner With Teddy
| 08 Mar 2014 3:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Interesting, very well written thank you
| Title: Bedtime Stories
| 08 Mar 2014 3:27 pm
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Love the scenes of the family as well as the stories thank you
| Title: The Stories You Never Heard About Grandpa Sev
| 08 Mar 2014 3:18 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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