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Title: Ashen Flags 16 Jan 2012 10:21 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this is very un-dracoish. i'm worried for him too

    Author's Response: Yes, but he's having a rough go, so therefore he wouldn't be much of himself, would he? Thank you for the review.
Title: The Beautiful Beyond 14 Jan 2012 11:16 pm
Reviewer: JWOHPfan (Signed) [Report This]
    Have you found a cure for Sev yet?????That's all I'm interested in right now so get to it!!!!!

    Author's Response: Well ... these things take time. This story is probably going to be about 28 chapters, so nothing's going to come too fast mind you. Hope you at least enjoyed some of humour.
Title: The Beautiful Beyond 13 Jan 2012 4:55 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely. There's something about just you and the stars at night, but Laura wasn't intrusive. Harry and Severus are still clueless then - maybe Munk can give them some hints!

    Author's Response: Oh gosh, could you imagine if Munk could talk and did give tips? "They like it when you kill a mouse for them ..." Somehow I don't think Severus or Harry would impress anyone with any hints from the cat. Thanks for the hilarious thought rosina!
Title: The Beautiful Beyond 13 Jan 2012 12:14 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, Munk! So that's what you've been doing :)! Well, I'm sure that with a castle full of students and teachers Snape will find people to adopt the kittens (I can see it now, Sev putting up posters saying "Please visit dungeons to adopt a cat" ;)!).
    Another great chapter, and I'm impressed with Snape's honesty when Harry asked him about women. He could have just made something up, after all. And I liked that he still talks to Lily.
    Will he tell the boys soon?

    Author's Response: Thanks so much for the feedback! Giggle ... Snape with kittens. And, yes, he will tell the boys within the next couple of chapters.
Title: The Beautiful Beyond 13 Jan 2012 11:29 am
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    awe!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Title: Confessions of an Old Enemy 09 Jan 2012 3:27 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    I can't deny I'm glad the next chapter will be a bit lighter - even though I thoroughly enjoyed this one despite it being so sad. I really liked how you wrote Sirius, giving him a proper adult character without making him unrecognisable.

    Author's Response: Thank you for the review rosina! I'm sort of glad it will be a bit more cheerful too, to tell the truth! I'm glad you like Sirius, as I have put a lot of thought into his character, so it's good to see it shows! Cheers!
Title: Confessions of an Old Enemy 08 Jan 2012 7:28 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    this was good. dark but good

    Author's Response: Glad you thought so. Thanks for the feedback! 
Title: Confessions of an Old Enemy 08 Jan 2012 1:50 pm
Reviewer: silver-slytherin65 (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus can't die, the books were heart breaking enough. Sev needs to see his son's grow up and have families of their own. Poor sevy should die when he's two hundred; surrounded by his son's , grandkids and great grandkids.

    Author's Response: You certainly have a good case now, that is for sure. You'd best be crossing those fingers for a miracle then ... The only reason why I can bear this is that while all of this is tragic, I know that some things do end up being alright. Some, but not all.
Title: Confessions of an Old Enemy 08 Jan 2012 11:49 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I hope the doe's a good omen... that was such a sad chapter (great writing, though!).

    I liked Snape and Black's conversation; they weren't being uncharacteristically friendly, but you could still tell that they're no longer enemies.

    Looking forward to more!

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it Sita, and thanks for the feedback on the writing; I was wondering whether people were rating the chapter lower because the writing is bad or because they're horrified I'm trying to kill of Severus, so I'm happy to know it's still good. Glad you liked the conversation, and that you can tell they no longer truly hate eachother. I appreciate the feedback greatly, especially here because I was wondering what people would think of the conversation.
Title: Confessions of an Old Enemy 08 Jan 2012 8:44 am
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, that is dark and our Sev isn't going to die - is he?? Can't stand to see it happen twice

    Author's Response: I'm not going to tell you now, am I?

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