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Title: All That Mattered 12 Feb 2013 8:21 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nicely tied up at the end, and I'm so glad that Severus accepted the Sherbet Lemon! Just a thought-- if you ever decided to do a one-shot based on this story, I would dearly love to see the scene between Severus and Sirius (with Harry grinning wildly) when Sirius discovers the true identity of the fox he rescued (and which sicked up on him... twice!). Loved the entire trilogy of stories, Whitetail! Way to go! :-D

    Author's Response: Oh gosh, that would be funny. I bet Sirius would light on fire on the spot when he found out just who he had so kindly carried back to the Burrow! I am so glad you enjoyed the trilogy! I had a blast writing it, and I am nothing but delighted at the knowledge that it has been enjoyed, especiallly considering I only ever meant to write the first story in this series! I am glad I continued, and that is very much in part because of the wonderful people who have reviewed and encouraged me. Even now it makes my day to see a comment left on something I have finished! It keeps me motivated to work on other projects. Thanks so much for your comments shadow!
Title: Something Crazy 12 Feb 2013 4:48 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Funny your end comment went as it did-- I was planning to say I kept grinning like an idiot as I read this chapter! Wonderful!

    Author's Response: Yeah, that is a little funny! I am glad you enjoyed it! I really, really had fun writing this part. Like, way too much fun. Thanks for sharing, and I am glad you too grinned like an idiot during this chapter!
Title: Molly's Say 12 Feb 2013 4:30 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I just had to giggle at the concept of Severus thinking his dress robes were a bit loose! It's in the very nature of robes to be loose; how else could he expect to billow effectively?! (Of course, perhaps billowing at a ball isn't the done thing...) ;-D (Having such fun with this story!)

    Author's Response: Haha, yeah, I suppose. Although, I think he was probably thinking in the arms, shoulders, and across the chest. The rest of the robes would be looser.  Besides, dress robes probably wouldn't flair too much because they might get caught on others! I am glad you are enjoying it! It is fun to hear your reactions.
Title: Daybreak 12 Feb 2013 3:50 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fred & George-- it's gotta be! But I'm keeping my fingers crossed that the W.Wort will really prove a cure!

    Author's Response: Haha, yeah, anything Fred and George cook up has to be pretty potent. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Ash 12 Feb 2013 2:25 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ha! Giving in to his inner fox...

    Author's Response: Ha indeed! Thanks for the review!
Title: A Ruined Road 12 Feb 2013 1:32 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This was awwwwwsome! Loved the fox's point of view, and especially Sirius' reaction to it! Gotta find out what happens NEXT!!! :-D

    Author's Response: Glad you are liking it shadow! It is wonderful to know you like the point of view of the fox.  Your review totally lifted me out of the midterm blues, so thanks so very much for the feedback!
Title: The Verdict Reached 12 Feb 2013 10:39 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Can't read through the blur of my tears...

    Author's Response: Well ... that's how I meant the chapter to be! :) Thanks for the review!
Title: Sleepwalker 10 Feb 2013 12:24 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Makes me wonder-- if Severus were to deage (just a BIT, like 6 years or so), could he go back before his condition took over? He'd still be old enough to be a parent, but it might give him time to research & come up with a cure... Not to mention, Harry and Draco would have extra time with him. And could he do this more than once, if necessary? Severus Dorian Snape, as it were! (If that's not where your story is heading, I might use the idea myself! :-D )

    Author's Response: Well, I suppose he could. However, the only sample of de-aging potion (conveniently) was shattered in A Summer's Misadventures. Seeing as the potion was created by accident, it would be very dangerous to try it again. Definitely a really cool idea though, shadow. I suppose I should have mentioned that the only de-aging potion sample was the one that smashed last story! I just assumed people thought it was. Go ahead and use that idea though, because it couldn't really have worked here. I' d love to read it!
Title: The Quiet Between the Shelves 10 Feb 2013 11:03 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome battle scene, unique in all respects! Loved the dragon, the staircase, and the scene with Severus and Laura amidst the shelves. :-)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much for the review Shadowienne! I had fun writing this scene so much too! Oh, and I forgot to mention one thing in the response to your last review, on why it would be tricky for Severus to de-age himself. The type of potion in this story, while it has been destroyed, would have reverted his memory to whatever age he was at. Therefore, if he were to de-age himself, it could only be a little while so that he would still have had the change of heart about Harry, because even if you used his memories in a pensive it probably would not have affected him as greatly as it did when he was truly there. This thought came to me just as I clicked submit on that last response, haha. Anyway, I really appreciate the feedback!

Title: All That Mattered 01 May 2012 12:59 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved it, but would you mind telling how it ended? As in how they got rid of Riddle? Was there a final battle or did the dispose of him sneakily?
    Thank you.

    Author's Response: I didn't mention it because I felt it wasn't important, given that they survived and that was 'all that mattered' But, in my mind it turned out a lot like the battle in DH. They destroyed all the horcruxes (Draco helping instead of hindering, and they ended up at Malfoy Manor anyway with Bellatrix there instead), Harry didn't know until the last moment that he had to die, like before, only instead of being given Snape's memories (because Severus obviously survives this time) Severus found Harry during the battle and gave him a phial of Dumbledore's memories that had been entrusted to him, which told the story of how Dumbledore figured it all out etc, and that Harry had to die. Then everything went as it did in the book. Then, Severus and Laura got married and lived happily every after. Hope that helped CarlinPaddy, and thank you for the review!

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