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Title: Molly's Say 08 Apr 2012 7:31 pm
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay for the new haircut! Shorter hair will be easier to keep clean, too. And what a good idea to have him wear something other than black. I like the Severus make-over - go Molly :)!

    As for Weasley's Wort, it sounds like a truly magical plant... let's hope it *is* the cure, although Severus does not dare get his hopes up (great characterization there).

    Now, of course, I'm very curious how the ball will turn out...

    Author's Response: I had a fair bit of fun inficting Molly on Severus. I can just see her wanting to cut his hair, what with how she was fussing over Bill's long hair in the books. I'm relieved that you liked how I portrayed Severus and his fear to hope. I agonized about making it all come out right. Thanks a lot for the review Sita, and you'll see how the ball turns out next chapter!
Title: Molly's Say 08 Apr 2012 6:47 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    Thanks to Molly, Severus is ready for the ball. It'll be a fun chapter to read about and I am looking forward to it. I hope Severus is able to get money for the Weasleys to grow the plant for the research community. Assuming he has recovered, he will be in their debt.

    Author's Response: It's nice to hear that you're excited for the ball! Money for the Weasleys would be lovely, wouldn't it? Thanks for the feedback!
Title: Molly's Say 08 Apr 2012 2:18 pm
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter, and wonder when Severus will tell the Weaslely's about the possible money they could make from the Wort.

    How funny that he took a haircut, and got his robes a different color - bet Albus will get a kick out of it. And I could just imagine the looks of the older girls in Hogwarts too, when they see the handsome professor! :)

    Hugs and Love,
    Vanime

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it Vanime, and thanks so much for the feedback!
Title: Molly's Say 08 Apr 2012 12:28 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! I had to laugh at Albus making sure that Severus HAS to dance (with Laura I hope)and Molly sorting him out too. I really like how Severus isn't wonderful at everything - like not being able to do a perfect colour change spell - it makes him seem more real. And hopefully you're not teasing with the cure!

    Author's Response: One of my peaves when it comes to fanfiction is when characters are made so perfect it hurts, so I'm glad you appreciate Severus' flaws too! Thanks a lot for the review.
Title: Daybreak 05 Apr 2012 3:32 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad he finally managed to turn back. And just when the Weasleys stuck him in the shed - poor Severus. Loved the reunion with Harry and Draco!

    Wouldn't it be great if Weasley's Wort turned out to be a cure? Maybe there's some potion Severus can use it for... I really liked the explanation with Fred and George's cauldron - it would be just like them to be mixing potent and potentially dangerous potions behind the broom shed ;)!

    Looking forward to more, as always!

    Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the feedback! I'm happy that you liked the explanation of how the wort originated. I thought it fit well considering what the twins usually get up to.
Title: Daybreak 03 Apr 2012 10:34 pm
Reviewer: graynavarre (Signed) [Report This]
    Does this mean he is going to get well??

    It was a happy christmas for the boys and everyone else.

    Author's Response: Ah, well, things could go either way at this point. Thanks for the feedback!
Title: Daybreak 03 Apr 2012 8:58 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL. Yay! Severus is back!

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Title: Ash 31 Mar 2012 3:21 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Hah! Loved the idea of Severus' fox instincts taking over to chase the hens, even if Molly's telling off probably means he'll never do it again.
    Minerva really should have noticed something strange about Ash, but maybe she was preoccupied with worrying about Severus. I wonder who will realise first, assuming he can't transform back without help.

    Author's Response: Yes, Minerva was very preoccupied. Thanks for reviewing rosina!
Title: Ash 30 Mar 2012 1:57 pm
Reviewer: slytherensangel26 (Signed) [Report This]
    another wonderful chapter! I'm really enjoying this!

    Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review!
Title: Ash 30 Mar 2012 3:44 am
Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe, Chicken Run featuring Severus Snape :)! I loved that scene, and Molly's outraged reaction.

    Minerva!!! - I'm sure when he's back to being human, Severus will never let her forget that she didn't recognize him. How frustrating it must be to be right there, but unable to talk. Hm, maybe he could try to write something (with his paws on the floor)?

    I also liked that Severus doesn't enjoy all aspects of being a fox, like doing his business outside and being treated like a pet. That seems very realistic and in character for him.

    Another great chapter, thank you for the regular updates we're getting!

    Author's Response: Oh Chicken Run ... I quite like that comparison! I'm glad you thought he's stayed in character as a fox. I think he would find a lot of it infuriating too. Thanks for the review Sita, and you're quite welcome for the regular updates! I've had the whole story finished for ages, so that's why the updates are coming so consistently.

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