| Title: Chapter 3
| 12 Dec 2011 5:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great story thank you. I love Bill and Draco's reaction to Harry and Severus getting in "Father" is a real laugh thank you
A little slow in places but still quite enjoyable. What a lovely ending to the chapter! Looks like Bill might have a little competition. And, go Sev!
Mmmmm... I love this story! I'm thinking Severus should be more weary of Bill though. He seems to be enjoying Harry's presence and shopping with her a little too much. Especially the t-shirt thing kind of sent warning flags up for me.
Great story!
Another awesome chapter! I love this story!!
I'm really enjoying your different spin on the "Snape's child" scenario.
The only problem I'm having is that I'm waiting for the melt down. I really can't imagine a 16 year old taking this news so calmly, even with the calming droughts. After all, Harry has already been noticing females, had daydreamed about and asked Cho out (if you're sticking with canon to this point) and now he finds that instead of dating girls, he IS one? Yeah, that could really mess with a teenager's sense of self.
I can easily imagine him/her being furious with Lily and probably hating her at this point. His/her entire life has been a lie and now he/she has to try to figure out how to live as a girl?
When you start with his insecurities of living with the Dursleys and add to that the fear that Lily might have used the potion because she was ashamed of either her child or the real father, I can see a serious melt down on the horizon.
Then there's also the thought that Lily was trying to pull a "fast one" on James and the questioning of whether or not Lily would ever had told Snape. Since Snape was obviously a victim in Lily's actions too.
i love it!!! i cant wait for you to update! i think your characterizations are awesome, and more Snape POV would be cool.
Please PLeas PLEASE tell me this isnt going to be a Harry-girl/Draco relationship thingy?
I like Bill if anything, Love this chapter..I usually love Draco but not now when he's googling Harry
Wow...this story just keeps getting better and better! I can hardly wait to read about Bill and Harry's little shopping trip to Harrod's....hmm, Severus, Bill and Harry really do need to think of a "new name" for Harry? I mean you can't have a girl called "Harry", it's just asking to attract attention, which certainly is something they don't want to do!
Though enjoyed the blushing conversation between Severus and Bill, in Harry's presense about just what supplies needed to be got for the girl, including those for her menses...oh the blush from the guys, hehe!
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