Excellent chapter! I loved it! I am glad that Sev is looking out for his Snakes! They need someone to care for them:). Amazing job!:)
Excellent chapter... I love that Harry/Jaden did well in potions...I also have to wonder if Snape will ever use Leglimency on Harry/Jaden in a future part.
I'm glad you explained Harry 's presence in St Mungo's... Very creative and believable. I wonder if the Jarden/Harry will find a way to sneak in to see himself.... He does have the Sytherin cunning now... lol
Keep up the awesome work!
I love the concept of this story - your chapters always have me hooked immediately from the first line! You are rather talented with the cliffies at the end, too. ;-)
There is a point in this fic that I don't really agree with. I think that Harry would be out of sorts at first and kind of miss being 'Harry', but I think that he would soon see the possibilities of being a different person.
| Title: A Change of House Colours
| 18 Jan 2012 5:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very clever and enthralling thank you for truly original story
I cannot wait to read Sev's pov. I'm slightly annoyed with Harry being so... well... shocked that he was put in Slytherin. I mean, come on, it was hinted in the first book that if he hadn't protested it wouldn't have happened. Ah... the sureness of youth.
So what will Sev's pov tell us and are Harry's friends better liars that him? And in what fashion were they better liars. And who is this mysterious J? James or someone else?
Somehow Harry.... I don't believe you can be Harry Potter anymore. Any I know your 12 (now 11 again) but Slytherin isn't going to be that bad.... right?
| Title: A Change of House Colours
| 14 Jan 2012 9:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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OOh, very interesting.
I wonder if anyone is suspicious because Jaden keeps asking about Harry.
Original story, can't wait to see where you go with it.
Author's Response: Thanks. Well, so far Harry has only asked two people about 'Harry Potter' and is likely to seem suspicious since Harry Potter is famous, though he should be careful because I don't think he has yet realised the difference in a Gryffindor asking and a Slytherin being curious. Thank you for your review! :)
| Title: Unfamiliar in Every Way
| 14 Jan 2012 9:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Great story WaterCrystals.
I'm dying to know how Harry/Jaden will deal with Snape as his Head of House.
Should be interesting.
Author's Response: Thanks for your comments and review.
Aww :D I love this Snape and I love how Jaden asked him why he hated Harry. I feel like this is going to be a great story!!
Author's Response: Thanks, and I'm thrilled that you think this will be a great story. I hope it will be and I will try my best
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