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Reviews For Baby in a Box
Title: Part 2/2 24 Dec 2011 9:42 pm
Reviewer: DestinedMommy (Signed) [Report This]
    A Happy Holiday to you too!
    I loved the ending, not too sentimental but still very sweet. You did a wonderful job!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the ending, even though Sev doesn't usually do sweet, lol! I hope you had a very happy holiday, thank you for reviewing!
Title: Part 2/2 24 Dec 2011 7:42 pm
Reviewer: Severus Draconis Potter (Signed) [Report This]
    Another Christmas story of fluff...Soo sweet and cute...*sigh*

    Happy Holidays

    Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Happy Holidays to you, too :)!
Title: Part 2/2 24 Dec 2011 6:58 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Signed) [Report This]
    I can just see Severus getting his revenge when Harry goes to Hogwarts. This was a very good story.

    Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Severus wouldn't forget about that kind of thing...
Title: Part 2/2 24 Dec 2011 4:28 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    "The End" kind of took me by surprise-- I'd thought there might be another chap or two! The stale fruitcake comparison was POWERFUL-- horrifyingly so, given the context. But the story does have a happy ending, and I especially like the fact that Harry seems fairly well adjusted and can accept the story of his arrival (at least as much as he knows for the time being), to the point that he laughs off the idea of his not being able to fit back in the box now. Also, I love the way Sev likens Harry's arrival to receiving a Christmas gift, so different from Petunia's attitude. Really well done!

    Author's Response:

    I know what you mean; I was thinking about adding a few more chapters about Harry settling in, but then I decided to keep it short-ish, and not turn it into a longer tale. I may do some one-shots in this universe, though!

    I'm glad you enjoyed the comparisons - thank you very much, and thank you for taking the time to review!

Title: Part 2/2 24 Dec 2011 4:16 pm
Reviewer: rosina (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely - part 2 didn't disappoint. Thank you!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed Part 2! Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Part 2/2 24 Dec 2011 1:57 pm
Reviewer: Kai (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh this is so wonderful. An instant classic! You could continue on throughout the year with small one-shots in this universe. Really, love it. Merry Christmas!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much! One-shots in this universe sound tempting... I'll look into that! Merry Christmas to you, too!
Title: Part 2/2 24 Dec 2011 11:36 am
Reviewer: CeeCeeMee (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done. What a sad, horrible thing for Petunia to do to that little boy! She had better hope that Snape never finds her. It wouldn't be pretty at all!!

    Thanks for sharing your wonderful tale with us. I really enjoyed it.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing! Yes, Petunia had better make sure she never comes across Snape again in her life...
Title: Part 2/2 24 Dec 2011 9:07 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Love it

    Author's Response: Thank you :)!
Title: Part 1/2 24 Dec 2011 8:45 am
Reviewer: cara-tanaka (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow can't wait for more
Title: Part 1/2 24 Dec 2011 1:03 am
Reviewer: shadowienne (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, whoa... That kinda made my hair stand on end, although Harry is obviously quite alive and well now! Fascinating start-- can't wait to see what you have in store! Loved the floating 4-year-old and the reference to caterwauling carolers! (Confundus through the keyhole--HA!) And so cute that Severus helped decorate the biscuits-- shows a good relationship between them!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you, I'm glad you like it! I think the fact that he's not constantly observed by hundreds of students allowed Snape to be more relaxed and drop the "evil bat" persona once in a while... and of course Harry helped a lot, simply by being himself! Actually, I was tempted to include floating Harry in an extra scene... I could just see him all eager to help and creating chaos in the process!

    Thank you very much for reviewing!

     


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