| Title: Awake
| 14 Aug 2014 3:02 pm
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| Reviewer: jtz (Anonymous)
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I noticed you had medical training, and so do I. When reading this chapter I was wondering... would this be a subarachnoid hemorrhage or a subdural??? :-)
| Title: Concussed
| 14 Aug 2014 3:00 pm
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| Reviewer: jtz (Anonymous)
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BTW, my 'reviews' are more like comments rather than true reviews because i don't really have any changes to suggest. I think your stories are brilliantly written. If you have any other stories on other websites, i would love to know so I can read those too!
| Title: Not Real
| 14 Aug 2014 2:59 pm
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| Reviewer: jtz (Anonymous)
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p.s. the only excuse I can bring up for not reviewing the chapters earlier was that doing reviews on the ipad is a bit of a P in the B... I know, no excuse. Now at my desktop, I don't have that excuse.
| Title: Let's Go Home
| 14 Aug 2014 2:58 pm
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| Reviewer: jtz (Anonymous)
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loved the story! hopefully you'll finish it!
| Title: Potions Accident
| 14 Aug 2014 2:57 pm
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| Reviewer: jtz (Anonymous)
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I'm also reviewing it in the HOPES that you might finish the story. I see that the last update has been a while ago. I know that life gets busy... I mean, I have a 10 month old daughter, so tell me about it. But just hoping, hoping that you MIGHT finish it. THANK YOU!
| Title: A Cold Christmas
| 14 Aug 2014 2:55 pm
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| Reviewer: jtz (Anonymous)
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Well, I've actually read this a few days ago but at the time I was just going from chapter and chapter and did not make time to leave a review... BAD!!! I mean if you put in your time to write this for us (THANK YOU! THANK YOU!) I should take the time to review. So THANK YOU. AMAZING story.
| Title: Conversations
| 11 Aug 2014 9:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Ijtz (Anonymous)
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| Title: A New Point of View
| 18 Apr 2014 6:37 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Anonymous)
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I check every so often to see if there has been an update to your sublime story. Just encouraging...I love your characterizations and the superb story-telling skill. I know real life takes over but when you have time to feel the muse again I will be so happy to read more of this beautifully told story.
| Title: A New Point of View
| 18 Jan 2014 6:20 am
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| Reviewer: Fictionfan (Anonymous)
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Sorry to hear about the job thing and good luck with the new venture.
This story has it all, well written and great characterization. These really feel like grown up versions of the people we knew and loved. The children are also.... Well the whole thing rocks! Please update when you can, this is one of my favorites.
Well, they've finally figured out who the Dark Man is!! I'm excited for the next chapter, please update again soon!!
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