Oh poor, poor Harry! What a nightmare! It's like being at the Dursley's again. I am interested where this will take Harry and then his relationship with Severus later.
Oh, how sad. And here I was hoping they would be nice and that Harry would have family to love--even though he will stay with Sev. The good news-there is no way he will be able to hide things from Don in the morning.
Looking forward to your next update.
V.
OMG What the hell is wrong with you???? How could you do that to Harry????? I don't know if I can read any more of what WAS a good story, I think you just ruined it for me and probably others!!!! I can't believe you!!!!
Author's Response: JWOHPfan, calm down. I'm sorry you didn't like this chapter, but I promise you it gets better for all involved and there will be a lot more fluff ahead. :)
I love the little moments between Harry and Sev...too cute!
Great chapter! I won't give anything away but I've a bad feeling about this!
Excellent chapter--both boys were in it and acting very much like unsure little 12 year olds! Quite sweet actually.
BTY-about 1/3rd of the way down you have a sentence that is just odd...
"Severus got up from his seat on Mrs. Landow and walked over to Severus wrapping his arms around the man." I think you may have a few typo's in there you might want to fix.
Loved the update! Thank you so much.
V.
i don't what to say to this chapter other then AMAZING !!!!!!!!!!!!!! AMZING!!!!!!!!!!!
you truly have a gift
awwww they are a family a strong one. the next challenge is a week with the cousins. Harry is stronger then he thinks I do believe he will get through it!!!!
the weasley twins awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
A good chapter though you make a mistake int the chapter that makes me cringe. A person who speaks parseltongue is a parselmouth, not a parseltongue. Yes, I know, something is wrong with me if something like that makes me cringe. :P
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