I love “seeing” Hogwarts through the experience of Evan’s touch. It’s beautifully done. Thank you.
I always like it when Harry goes where he’s meant to. Thanks for the nice chapter.
Draco’s decision in the train compartment was surprising! Your characters are OOC, but it’s a sweet and touching story.
Interesting! I like how Harry is standing up for his convictions.
This is heart-wrenching, but that last bit of the chapter was really sweet.
A sad and touching start to your story.
| Title: Chapter 24
| 11 Sep 2021 9:56 am
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Just found and re read the story. It is so good and I hope you can one day complete it
| Title: Chapter 24
| 10 May 2021 7:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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Idky but it worries me a little that she was with dumbledore just then ... Maybe I'm just paranoid. I also think lupin may chicken out of the ritual cause he feels like it would be betraying James. Just have to see I guess. Poor draco, they're sending him about even Hough he was just tortured too just a a day ago (I think it was just a day)
| Title: Chapter 23
| 10 May 2021 5:47 pm
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| Reviewer: Cayj (Signed)
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But it's illegal right so that just means they can toss severus in prison and then dumbledore gets custody of harry again anyway, and he'd certainly split him from draco..... Not really seeing the benefit of doing it
| Title: Chapter 13
| 10 May 2021 12:30 pm
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Aww I wonder if they could just get bunk beds. The dungeon ceilings can't be that low but then, it's hogwarts so who knows. I honestly figured dumbledore had something up his sleeve like maybe he'd already told the family services people that he disagreed with snape getting draco so I'm glad to see both adoptions went off without a hitch. Flitwick is taking Mondays but Lizzy had mwf so I guess she's down to two days now. Think figg was lying anyway. What,has harry not gone to school for 3 years -- since the accident? Someone should've seen what snape saw
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