| Title: Mother's Love
| 03 Nov 2012 9:34 am
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| Reviewer: Alice (Anonymous)
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This is such a wonderful piece of writing and I cannot believe that it hasn't won an award yet! The characters are different, but still believable and Lily's mothering instinct is not overdone, as tends to be so - nor is Harry's character. It's really, really good!
This is amazing! So sad but really well written and believable!
| Title: Mother's Love
| 13 Mar 2012 4:20 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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You have definately got Cannon Severus here very well written thank you
This was well written but so incredibly sad!
Awesome. The language in this piece is sublime, as well as the pacing and characterizations. Although we love redeemed!Snape in this fandom, this take is so true to him and what could be. Painful and wonderful read.
Wow. I have to admit, if I had known how this story would end, I'm not sure I would have read it - but I'm glad I did! You captured a side of Severus that many writers try to ignore, but which is still very much there: His bitterness, his jealousy, and his somewhat unhealthy possessiveness of Lily. And yes, I could see this happening - I can also imagine a scenario where Snape warms to Harry, at first just to please Lily, and then because he realizes that Harry is not his father. But this is very realistic, too, if very sad. A very well-written and thoughtful story! 10 out of 10.
Oh, wow, I'm not sure what to say. This is just plain incredible. Great story. Sorta off the beaten track, what with Severus not being the 'good guy underneath it all' you usually see here. I like it, excellent.
| Title: Mother's Love
| 12 Mar 2012 12:18 am
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| Reviewer: TATIS (Signed)
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Hello
Sorry for my English, it is very very bad.
I loved this fic.
Please keep writing.
Do not know who hate the most
Lili for not realizing
or Snape for being a bastard
I really liked.
| Title: Mother's Love
| 11 Mar 2012 10:01 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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A beautiful story, really. The beginning had a lot of run on sentences, but you could really tell how you grasped the idea in the middle and ran on with it. Truly, beautiful.
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