I love this. You’re a great writer.
This is terrific. I love the whole set up of your story.
Nice start to your story. Very Slytherin of Snape.
That's too bad there's no more... It isn't abandoned, is it? I like this story a lot. Your Harry is very different than in most other stories, but his upbringing explains it. I don't understand why your Lily would be disliked, her relationship with Snape has a ring of truth to it. I can't imagine their marriage being easy. Conflicted Snape in his parental role is very sincere. I like it that he was a decent parent even if he was holding back emotionally. That's a difficult situation and poor Harry is a victim of it. Children need to be loved and cherished. I also like the action bits, but I think Lily's stand on keeping Harry in the dark is very naive and it has already put the boy in danger once.
| Title: Chapter 11
| 17 Oct 2014 1:04 am
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| Reviewer: kalico (Anonymous)
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great story and Im wondering if you'll be writing any more to it.....I hope so and I cant wait.....
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*rolls eyes* get up off your ass snape and go and get your family back!!!!
Some vise words from Lupin. Please update i would love to see what happens :)
And one last thing: Severu and Harry go to therapy and she stays home! As if she was not an active part of the problem. In fact she is the source of the problem. But of course, it is not perceived well. If there are problems in the family's fault Severus. She is a saint (Santa Lily de las tunas). This detestable woman Lily ¬¬ Your fic moved me a lot, made r03;r03;me rage. Are you a good writer. Do not leave your story. Saludos y mis mejores deseos para ti.
I read your fic last night and I caused a lot of anger. I hate that kind of woman: You choose to stay with a man but does not want her children. Women without pride or dignity. Women unable to say: Or I want me and my son or you will in our lives. (Te me vas directito a la chingada. You would say in Spanish). Severus can be whatever you want, for me is a jerk (patán in spanish). But she is her mother, she is Harry responsible. She could give you a happy life, either by herself or with another couple. Instead, stays with a man who rejects his son. They will grow up knowing that it is not accepted, not loved, not part of a family. And worse, since Severus and James chose Lily, both must be the same kind of idiot. Such friendly woman who neglects the children, can not choose good men. Siga escribiendo, es un muy buen fic. Saludos.
more please. this is a good story. cant wait for the next chapter. thank you. :)
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