I liked the idea behind this story, but I am uncomfortable with how little Lily seems to care about her own child. How can she stay married to a person who clearly does not love her child? Or can even get along with him? Are you going to address this in the future?
Author's Response: Yes. I do plan to address this issue as I get more into Lily and Snape's background and have the opportunity to do more Harry and Lily interaction. I assure you that Lily loves Harry very much and I'm slightly disturbed that I gave the impression she didn't. You have to remember that Lily and Snape have been fighting more lately because things are WORSE than normal. Their lives have not been without periods of peace and, as you'll find out, Snape and Lily have been through a lot together. Thanks for the input. I hope I can more clearly represent the dynamic between them in future chapters.
Oh, this should be interesting. It seems as though Harry and Snape are going to have no choice but to get along.
Good job. Can't wait to see more.
Oh dear. Snape is a cold man, but hopefully, he'll at least be decent with Harry, if not lovey-dovey. Good job. Can't wait for more.
This story kinda makes me sad lol. It is so angst-y. You're doing a fabulous job though:)
Author's Response: Lol. On FFnet, I actually have a warning that it's not fluffy. Like, at all. I mean, I LOVE fluffy, feel-good Snape and Harry fics but I really wanted to write something that (I feel, anyway) is more realistic. I think I've decided, though, that they will get some kind of resolution. I have an idea, as a matter of fact of what my catalyst will be. A most evil idea. :D :P Thanks for your reviews.
Aw. I hope Snape isn't mean to him forever:( I can tell either way this story has sucked me in already lol good job!
I just love the last sentence about spotless classroom XD
So far so good, keep it up and you will have reader in me.
| Title: Chapter 2
| 08 Apr 2012 11:17 am
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Really enjoy this so far! Can't wait for your next update!
Oooooh dear, Severus is so evil in this story! And poor poor Harry with his mum never taking his side! Can't wait to see where this goes!
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