great story. cant wait for the next chapter. :)
Interesting story. I hope you plan to continue it. Would love to read more.
| Title: Chapter 12
| 28 Mar 2013 5:45 pm
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| Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous)
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I hope that you haven't forgotten about this. It's such a awesome story and very well written. Please update soon!!!
I think I'd better go back and reread...seems I'm a bit lost all in all good chapter
Any chance of an update?! I miss this story! :(
Oh sweet Merlin...I luv this one! Pray continue....why do all authors and TV serials leave off at the most interesting moments??? Beautiful, I gave you 5 frogs...er...here, I mean. Would 10 stars sound better....?
Oi... it's all a bit sticky now. He said / she said... it's off, it's on.. Problems, time to breathe... never asked for the responsibility - all the things that should never be said in a relationship. I wonder how they're going to get past it all.
Poor Harry, and now the boy thinks it's all because of him. Which in a way it is... but neither parent is supposed to let him in on that fact... oi, oi, oi.
misundersnape...
I like this story. The plot is so different from canon, but still you keep the characters so wonderfully canon-like. Also, they feel natural. They behave "believably" as stupid as it sounds, it is quite rare in fanfictions. I like this story. Sorry for short reviews I keep leaving, I am usually reading on my cell-phone and writing on it is so boring (lazy me). Mila
| Title: Chapter 11
| 23 Apr 2012 9:28 am
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| Reviewer: Lia (Signed)
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I discovered the story just today and loved it. I like how the characters have shaped up in this scenario.
About this particular ch, I did not dislike Lily at all. I can understand her point of view pretty well just like I ca understand Snape's. I suppose the one caught in this cross fire is Harry.
I am looking forward to reading this story more.
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