Once again, amazing details of Harry's early life with the Dursleys. I especially liked the magically-refilling bottle!
I really liked the detailed description of Godric's Hollow, as well as the encounter between Voldemort and the Potters-- you've done an excellent job of filling in some blanks in canon, showing us "the rest of the story" of that fateful night. Terrific opening to your story!
| Title: Chapter 14
| 12 Aug 2012 9:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Hmmm...really interesting so far. Curious to see what they'll have to talk about and why Lucius was behind the whole gift/letter thing. Update soon!
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wow good story.. well done
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| Title: Chapter 8
| 12 Aug 2012 8:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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I hope Harry learns to trust soon! And doesn't have too large of a breakdown when he realizes he isn't going back to the Dursleys, ever.
| Title: Chapter 6
| 12 Aug 2012 8:33 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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I don't think Harry will take well to being passed on from person to person. Poor little guy :(
| Title: Chapter 5
| 12 Aug 2012 8:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Oh little Harry, he definitely is in desperate need of a hug. Hope to see Snape come around soon.
| Title: Chapter 3
| 12 Aug 2012 8:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Ooo poor Harry! And poor Snape! Azkaban is definitely not a nice place to stay...even if it was for 3 months!
| Title: Chapter 2
| 12 Aug 2012 7:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Woah, large space at the end again haha
Really liked this chapter. Good representation of both Petunia and Vernon.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 12 Aug 2012 7:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Kai (Signed)
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Hmm...interesting start. There seem to be some formatting issues on this chapter, but it's probably having to do with P&S. It's easily fixable by going into your story and editing out the extra spaces. Also the code r12 shows up a couple of times.
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