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Title: Sirius Black 19 Aug 2013 5:01 pm
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    The house is a hoot, love the descriptions of Petunia. Also, you did a good job showing how Dumbles works. Just suggestions and hints that people think are commands. His way out or power, have to think on that.

    I love Sirius and how you have portrayed him as a man is great. Now off to Croatia.
Title: Maybe Even Love 26 Apr 2013 3:03 am
Reviewer: Steve_Arkarian (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is really well written! I've enjoyed reading it so far and can't wait to find out what happens next!
Title: Maybe Even Love 21 Feb 2013 5:39 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    There are many lines I want to paste here and giggle about and go I loved those lines!!! But then again it would take up a lot of lines xD SO I'll just leave it as I loved it ALL! Can't wait for an update, please update when you can.
    But one thing from this chapter stands out...won't Sirius be getting in trouble? I hope Hadwyn and the girls get to give him his punishment hehe XD or maybe that's too evil....I don't think so. (insert evil laughter)
Title: Maybe Even Love 08 Feb 2013 1:45 am
Reviewer: teriwright (Signed) [Report This]
    i like that you have allowed for harry's healing away from hogwarts. so many stories have harry experience a traumatic event, pat him on his head, and say "off you go" with no care to his emotional healing...cough cedric, rebirth of voldie, sirius's death in canon...cough. i look forward to reading more soon!
Title: Maybe Even Love 05 Jan 2013 1:23 pm
Reviewer: 12reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Yeesh! Sirius is SCARY, especially when he's so recently out of Azkaban. Big Blue was a nice touch and I love that Harry calls Sev Papa! I nearly cried! I hope that there will be more interaction between the dragon and Harry but whatever you've got is sure to be good! Till next time!
Title: Maybe Even Love 01 Jan 2013 1:53 pm
Reviewer: Jenny_Cullen (Signed) [Report This]
    Great story please update
Title: Maybe Even Love 31 Dec 2012 4:50 pm
Reviewer: Vanime (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow! What a great chapter! Wonder if Sirius will go to Azkaban for this?? They (the OoTP)can tell it was done with magic right?

    Should be interesting to see what happens next - I did find myself squirming about Petunia's tongue, but you know, I guess it is justice. And if they did capture Sirius - how would he even begin to explain about James???

    Looking forward to the next chapter!!

    Hugs and Love and Happy New Year!
    Vanime
Title: Dragon Around 30 Dec 2012 5:02 pm
Reviewer: ZombiePixxie (Signed) [Report This]
    I absolutely adore this fic. Great writing style, great character, just general greatness.
Title: Dragon Around 23 Sep 2012 4:44 pm
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    I could not stop reading your story. Great to see how Severus and Harry are starting to really understand they need each other. Loved James & Lily, and loved James as a ghost. Great to see Sirius and how he is getting a lesson on forgetting the past too. The two girls are a hoot.

    Author's Response:

    Glad you like the girls.  I have another reviewer over on FF.net that DESPISES them and goes to great lengths to explain to me just how psychotic and unlikely each is.  *huffs in indignation*

    But enough about me!

    Thanks for the two reviews and I hope to get a new chapter relatively soon (after I update Session Transcripts and Burnt).

Title: Denial 23 Sep 2012 12:09 pm
Reviewer: Ann Jinn (Signed) [Report This]
    Just came across your work. WOW! Good job on the abuse and also Harry's reasoning to go to Snape.

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