Lovely, love a snarky Snape. The sick one was pretty good too.
Aw, that was cute! lol Poor Harry. Shopping for underwear with Snape would not be my idea of fun. Uh...well, never mind. Poor Harry.
Great chapter though. Love this story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Great chapter! I loved all the little things that you put into the chapter, it helped make it "real."
""It is not rare for a duelling wizard to also intentionally cast spells against their surroundings. While the other participant is attempting to guess what is next coming, the first wizard has blown up the wall beside him."" Aww, a nod to poor, poor Fred? Aww. :-( I was angry when he (and snape, and dobby, remus) died.
The bit at the end about clothes shopping was right on too! Hehe about the last line. Embarrassment indeed!
AWESOME JOB!
Interesting! I will be looking forward to reading more
| Title: Chapter 2
| 05 Nov 2012 5:34 am
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| Reviewer: orgwoman (Anonymous)
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Very cute beginning. I love your stories and your writing style. Looking forward to more!
Wow speedy update! There's only two chapters so far but I really like this story! I love how you write Snape and Harry; their dialogue seems so natural. This chapter was pretty funny too, what with Snape's cold and the Nintendo haha :D
Oh the poor man.
And who is this mysterious James? Can't wait to see what happens next!
| Title: Chapter 1
| 30 Oct 2012 6:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great start to the story. Love their exchanges especially Severus' cold!
Great start. Like the idea of defense lessons. Always wondered why Dumbledore left Harry out to dry.
Yay. Awesome! Welcome back. :D
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