Wonderful story! I love the way it’s written. It was moving and so nicely done.
Thank you so much for completing this lovely story.I enjoyed it deeply. It gives me a glimpse of what your other story, a Work in progress, would feel like. (still hopeing...) Your Harry, in there, is intelligent, collected and thoughtful. Rarely seen .You have described that Snape's inner dilemma very well. Thank you. More, please, when you have the time and inspiration. So many marvellous stories are left hanging forever,a heart-breaking habit for a reader, and the 6 per cent, that are finished, are that much Better for it. Doesn't it sadden you, too, when a lovely gem or gripping, emotionally true story just peters out? Happy springtime, A grateful reader
*squeals* *fangirls all over the place* *falls off of couch*
Title: Chapter 1
| 19 May 2015 3:56 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Love these secret father stories thank you
I loved it. It was a very good look at what would've happened if Snape and Harry had a close relationship from the beginning. I loved the snapshots of the events that took place throughout the years. I loved the happy ending. Thanks for writing.
Title: Epilogue
| 12 Feb 2014 2:55 am
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Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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I loved how you summed up a whole year in such a short passage and it didn't even feel like you left anything out. Great story!
Title: Epilogue
| 15 Jun 2013 8:02 pm
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Reviewer: Haley (Anonymous)
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That was a lovely story. I love how you managed to save all my favourite characters :) I also love that you managed to make Harry and Severus' relationship so integral while still keeping to the rest of the story. I love Ron and Hermione so much as his friends and sometimes Severus being his father/mentor changes that too much. Anyway, brilliantly done!
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