Love this story! Can't wait to see what happens next.
Hugs and Love,
Vanime
awww good for them all. I am so glad he kept him and the adoption was finalized. Thanks for updating and welcome back.
| Title: Chapter 1
| 09 Dec 2012 7:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Manya (Anonymous)
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Hi,
I really like your first chapter. It's a somewhat unusual setting and that makes it all the more fun. Please update soon as I'm sure this shall be a wonderful story.
Hi!
Nice beginning but you seem far from the "natural" Severus Snape. I hope he will have a stronger character. What is significant in Severus is his wit, sharp, and his repartee.
But we will see ;-)
Continue on your way and good writing!
I enjoyed the content of this story. Only thing I'd suggest it to look for grammatical errors such as comma splices because they get in the way of understanding the story. Other than that, please update again soon!
Aww, how cute!! I'm really looking forward to reading more of this :D
Nice start I like it very much. So I am guessing that you kept the story the same in the sense that Peter was secret keeper but Sirius was convicted of the crime correct?
Anywas keep up the awsomeness and update a soon as possible would be nice.
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