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Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 28 Apr 2013 6:35 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Great beginning. I can't wait to see Harry's reaction to the adoptions. lol

    Author's Response: I'm glad that you like the beginning. I might have to rework the next intended chapter, as I don't really have Harry's reaction at all. The writing was all about Severus.
Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 28 Apr 2013 10:29 am
Reviewer: 12reader (Anonymous) [Report This]
    You know, I wish there was a follow button here like on fanfiction.net, it would make it easier for one to find out when stories they like are updated, rather than looking at the most recent every few days...

    Oops, didn't mean to run on. Anyway, this is very good. I've always liked stories that depict Severus' grandfather still living or Severus having some kind of family from his mother's side, no matter how they turn out... Like 3 Slytherin Marauders. You already have me hooked, so please update soon. Can't wait to find out what the grandfather is like, hope he likes the both of them.

    Author's Response:

    I believe there is a way to follow, though you have to be signed in, and I think you have to click on "Track this Story", and allow alerts to your email from the account info section. Additionally, I do have this story on my ff.net site, though under a different pen name...

     

    I'm glad that you like this story, and that you are eager for another update. I do hope that you will enjoy Severus' grandfather; I think he's different than many might portray him, but I've never read a story in which Severus' grandfather is still alive, so I have no idea. 

     

    And, no I am rambling. Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to write a review. :-)

Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 28 Apr 2013 1:20 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Ron and Hermione are truly great friends. I love how Sev realized by adopting Harry "they" would be in his life forever. Great chapter.

    Author's Response: I agree - Ron and Hermione are good friends. I'm grateful for your feedback, and that you liked the chapter.
Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 27 Apr 2013 9:35 pm
Reviewer: bridgeportfox (Signed) [Report This]
    I am enjoying your depiction of Ron. It's nice to see him shown as being smart and loyal even if he seems kind of emotional. Though at that age hormones can be an emotional roller coaster. I'm looking forward to meeting Severus' grandfather.

    Author's Response: Thank you; I appreciate your feedback, and agree about teenage hormones. I work with kids this age, and their hormones truly are all over the place.
Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 27 Apr 2013 7:59 pm
Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Your first two chapters laid down a solid foundation for your story, and I'll look forward to seeing the way the rest of it unfolds. And BTW, I do like your sensitive presentation of Ron!

    Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you liked the presentation of Ron as sensitive.
Title: Dotting i's and Crossing t's 27 Apr 2013 6:11 pm
Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed) [Report This]
    it was a information chapter. Just getting the info across that is needed for background stuff and to also get the letter to grandfather sent. Next chapter will or may have the reply from the grandfather and Severus telling Harry his plans about the adoption and lets hope Harry doesn't freak out.

    Author's Response: Interesting synopsis. Thanks.
Title: Argument Interrupted 27 Apr 2013 1:11 pm
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you a great start

    Author's Response: Thanks to you as well.
Title: Argument Interrupted 25 Apr 2013 1:56 am
Reviewer: jolisgsd (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice beginning to a story. Well written.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you found this beginning well written.
Title: Argument Interrupted 25 Apr 2013 1:07 am
Reviewer: Hello (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey this looks great so far. I really hope to read more.

    Author's Response: Thank you. I only hope that you will enjoy the rest of what I wrote.
Title: Argument Interrupted 25 Apr 2013 12:09 am
Reviewer: bianca_slate (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I liked this story so much I had to review it the moment I finished reading it....and promptly forgot my P&S screen name and PW.
    Anyway, it's just as profound on second and third reading. I love this twist on the mentor/adopted son/Severitus(?) storyline.
    I'm intrigued that Dumbledore will let Severus off the hook for spying on Voldemort. I suspect he'll try to snag Draco for that on down the line, but that pales to the Very Original Idea that binding himself, and Potter, to the Prince name and blood will break the Dark Mark binding Severus to Voldemort. I wonder if it will do anything to the horcrux in Harry's scar, or if you don't plan to have that storyline, if the binding will break Harry's Voldemort-link-induced headaches and nightmares.
    I SO look forward to your next chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Wow, thank you. I'm honored that you read this initial chapter through more than once, and am humbled by your feedback. I fear that the rest of what I wrote for this particular story will be disappointing to you as I do not go into any of those details that you mentioned. What I wrote is mostly about the transformation of Severus, but I'd like to visit these ideas that you mentioned in a companion story that will focus more on Severus and Harry.

     

    Thank you again!


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