well that was interesting I hope something can be done to have Alex get his true looks back
Nice chapter :)
Poor Harry though... although I can understand everyones reactions I steel think Tobias should be a little bite more careful about the way he behaves in front of Harry.
At least Severus tries to make amends - one can see how much he cares about his lost little brother already :)
Lily is... well, she annoys me. All that time she ignored Harry and now she starts to feel regret for her actions? bleh.
Please continue as fast as you can :) I enjoy your story a lot!
Title: Talking with Sna-Severus
| 29 May 2013 11:10 pm
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Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous)
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Me encanto,
El detalle de Severus defender a su hermano es grandioso pues muestra que el realmente le quiere,
y me gusta que Harry comprenda que su familia biológica realmente lo amaba y por supuesto espero que pronto pueda conocer a sus padrinos y su padre
Gracias por actualizar tan pronto
I'm glad Harry agreed to talk to Severus before he left the hospital. It was a good neutral place for them to talk. I also enjoyed the scene of Snape awarding points to Harry for his 'good aim.'
i look forward to reading where you take this story, in particular the reasons for harry's abduction. will he take another blood adoption potion to get his original looks back?
Title: Talking with Sna-Severus
| 29 May 2013 3:44 pm
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Reviewer: 12reader (Anonymous)
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Okay, this is heartbreaking but wonderful all at the same time, does that make sense? I hope things work out, you have me hooked, especially since the twins and Ginny are being supportive. About time someone took Pansy down a few pegs!
I'm looking forward to an update!
it was such a serious chapter until “Ten points to Gryffindor for good aim.” I am still laughing and it hard to type from all my shaking. Anyways, I am glad Harry and Sev talked. I have a feeling Harry will be joining that Snapes soon and getting resorted.
woah love this story.... a nice change to what i've been reading
Love this story so far. Very interesting plot line. Looking forward to reading more.
Title: Discussions
| 28 May 2013 8:55 pm
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Reviewer: Kendra (Anonymous)
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Por favor, por favor, actualiza pronto nuevamente.... me encanto la adición de Tobias Snape, realmente fue un giro en la trama, y es uno bastante espectacular, oh, por Salazar!!!!
Un muy buen capítulo
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