| Title: The price of distrust, Part II
| 27 Jun 2013 3:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you Fmh. Your feedback is always welcome.
| Title: The price of distrust, Part I
| 27 Jun 2013 2:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for a great chapter
| Title: Prologue
| 27 Jun 2013 2:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great chapter and starter for the story I'm hooked!
Author's Response: Thank you, Fmh!
| Title: The price of distrust, Part II
| 24 Jun 2013 11:08 pm
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| Reviewer: Alex (Anonymous)
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So young and naïve. Sev you played your part far too well.
| Title: The price of distrust, Part II
| 24 Jun 2013 2:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Outlawgal (Signed)
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before Dumbledores Portait...oh boy this may not be so good. Now I am worried im not sure for who but I have a feeling that it might be Dumbledore that Harry might explode at and Snape was trying to prevent that or I could just be totally wrong. Hmmm I will have to wait and see :)
Author's Response: You're right to be worried! The reason why will unfold gradually over the next few chapters. Good guesses. After chapter 4, has your guess changed?
That is an awesome riddle. How long did it take for you to come up with it? I can never make mine work.
Harry better remember it if not Snape will be so disappointed
Author's Response: Thanks, Outlawgal! To come up with it, I started by listing the key words I wanted to include and alternatives for them, then looked for words that rhymed with them, and finally filled in the sentences.
| Title: Prologue
| 19 Jun 2013 10:23 pm
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| Reviewer: Skye (Anonymous)
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A interesting take on the story...
I can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response: Thanks, Skye. More coming soon!
oooo good cliffhanger at the end cant wait for the update, love the chat with hagrid and sev too
Author's Response: Glad you liked the chat. I've aways thought with the way that Hagrid would defend Snape that there must have been some camaraderie there.
hmmm im not sure where your head yet but I am interested. Can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. Feel free to speculate!
I'm curious where you'll take this. Please write more!
Author's Response: Thanks for the note! Update coming soon.
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