I liked it, but I expected him to be more mad at Umbridge in the end. Nice job!
| Title: Etched In Skin
| 21 Sep 2013 11:15 am
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| Reviewer: Lily (Anonymous)
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But the tag had corporal punishment on it... Snape didn't spank Harry or anything...
Continue????? This is an awesome fic and I'd love to see Snape tear Umbridge a new one! Haha! Wonderful writing! Bravo!
| Title: Etched In Skin
| 16 Sep 2013 6:23 pm
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| Reviewer: my_patronus_is_a_dinosaur (Anonymous)
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WOW - this was wonderful!! I'd love to hear more - maybe about the confrontation between Snape and Umbitch :)
Very well written - detailed and awesome.
| Title: Etched In Skin
| 16 Sep 2013 5:45 am
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| Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Anonymous)
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Oh COME ON!!!!
Can't we see him take the Umbitch down?!?!
Very suspenseful, and detailed. I enjoyed reading this story. It was well characterized. Excellent writing.
Ooh grisly! The descriptions of the infected wound were good. It conjured quite a horrific image. Snape was good too, and quite in character. I also really liked the way you ended it. Obviously some people will be annoyed that it didn't go further (people almost always are) but I preferred it this way. It had a kind of eerie finality to it, and left it up to the imagination just what Snape did.
Great story (and a very vivid description of a festering wound :) ). I liked Snape's reaction - not too sympathetic, but still concerned for a student's wellbeing.
| Title: Etched In Skin
| 15 Sep 2013 2:03 pm
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| Reviewer: juli (Anonymous)
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Excellent story would like to have ween what Snape did to Umbridge.
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