| Title: Fifteen: Misadventures of Treacle Tart
| 20 Nov 2015 11:16 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, lovely Luna. Soft, gentle soul. No wonderful she is like a soothing balm to Harry's wounds.
I hope that Snape stops avoiding Harry soon.
Another wonderfully, emotional and well-written chapter. You really reach your character's souls.
| Title: Fourteen: The Crippling Vice
| 20 Nov 2015 11:04 am
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Omg. Thank God.
Finally the barriers are broken .
Snape can see the vulnerable child , the abused child, not James Potter or Lilly...just Harry.
Great chapter.
Can't wait for more.
Such a great chapter! Please please please continue!
| Title: Sixteen: Butterfly Tears
| 19 Nov 2015 8:55 pm
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| Reviewer: Abie (Signed)
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I'm so thrilled to see that this story has been updated! The writing is flawless as usual, and the characterizations are amazing. I'm looking forward to more.
| Title: Sixteen: Butterfly Tears
| 19 Nov 2015 7:41 pm
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| Reviewer: SHallow (Signed)
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I felt the same way as Harry when someone cried to me. Golly that is difficult. Awesome way to sum that up, and Snape was awfully nice compared to normal to give Harry a chance. Great work!
LOL yeah I actually don't like Cho. I mean, I understand she's grieving, and everything, but it's been months. Maybe people do still cry about people they've lost months later, but I don't. If it's going to make me cry at a super awkward time, then I just don't think about them at that particular time. I dunno. Maybe Cho's unrealistic, or maybe I'm a cold-hearted...woman...but I've just never liked Cho. I like your chapter tho! LOL poor Snape - "you're asking *me*?"
| Title: Fourteen: The Crippling Vice
| 19 Nov 2015 7:19 am
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| Reviewer: F (Anonymous)
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What a speedy update! Yay! Awesome chapter and love the angst. Forgive me for leaving such a short review for a chapter that deserves more, but I'm off to scour Shakespeare for "magical" references ;) looking forward to the next update!
| Title: Fifteen: Misadventures of Treacle Tart
| 18 Nov 2015 11:09 pm
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| Reviewer: tess4aria (Signed)
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You are an awesome storyteller. I feel so drawn in by each and every chapter. Cannot wait for the next bit!
Wow! You're on a roll! Great chapter as always!
Wow! You're on a roll! Great chapter as always!
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