I'm glad that Harry and Snape seem to be getting along better. The flashback was nice and I liked the thought of Severus' that he was a fool for Lily and would be for Harry as well. It was good to see Malfoy suffering some consequences for his actions, too.
This was a good chappie..still waiting for Sev to get his clue..and see the letter.
Wow who would have thought Severus would do that to his own house. To bad Draco is being a poop stain and taking it out on other people now.
I still think Harry should tell Severus but I am sure you are going to have him wit until the end of the year.
Author's Response: Hehe. Right you are! But no worries, just a little longer now.
| Title: Part IV
| 13 Feb 2014 5:16 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter, lump in throat time
His name is Harry Snape grrrr Harry just needs to grab his Gryffindor courage by the "horns" and go up to Severus give him a big huge and say hi dad.
I'm sure Harry was disappointed that Ron didn't stay at Hogwarts over Christmas but I liked that he had to stay in the Slytherin dorm. It gave him a chance to meet some other Slytherins and to get a bit closer to Snape. The scene where Hagrid complained about how bad the Dursleys was good, too. That should give Severus something to think about.
Hey this was a great chapter, I loved this chapter I can't wait until the next chapter. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the relationship progresses from here!!!
| Title: Part III
| 10 Feb 2014 11:15 pm
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| Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous)
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lol nice I look forward to more when you can ty
| Title: Part III
| 05 Feb 2014 9:47 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Part II
| 05 Feb 2014 9:37 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great blend of cannon and your story and a very mature Harry thank you
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