| Title: Chapter 9
| 09 Feb 2014 10:06 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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precioso momento entre Severus y Harry en realidad la reacción de Harry fue muy buena
espero con ansias la nueva cita,
y por supuesto existe la duda del sujeto invisible
buen capítulo
“I’m glad he did.” “Because you saved mine.”
Thoughs two sentences said by Harry to Snape may have just changed everything between them.
geez if that was Quirell in Saves office then you had him take another step in trying to harm Harry.
Geeez almost brings tears to your eyes the way Snape did a complete 180 and changed. The git
geez and hear I thought Snape wouldn't be that bad. Man was I wrong
I like how Severus found Harry. Now that I think about it Harry isn't really going to be close to Hagrid is he? Not like the books.
| Title: Chapter 4
| 08 Feb 2014 1:28 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Bueno sin duda es interesante el concepto de Severus lavarse las manos del problema de Harry,
y que cada vez haya que impide el aprendizaje de Harry acerca de Hogwarts o la magia,
sin duda es interesante
| Title: Chapter 1
| 08 Feb 2014 1:09 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Es tan dulce que le de una sonrisa inocente al hombre que esta ayudando al asesino de sus padres a volver al poder....
Me encanta como has comenzado esta historia, buena idea la que estas manejando
Very interesting first chapter! I hope Snape doesn't send him back and I'm so glad he noticed the abuse right off (:
No Snape in this chapter, maybe the next one?
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