| Title: A Moment for Reflection
| 22 Mar 2014 4:31 pm
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| Reviewer: rosina (Signed)
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I'm really enjoying reading this. I love all the background you're introducing, and the elves were lovely in this chapter. Who wouldn't want a growly dragon. I still find the concept a bit odd, but I'm looking forward to finding out what happens as we see more of the boys and the new family unit.
| Title: A Moment for Reflection
| 21 Mar 2014 6:43 am
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Awww!!!
Terriblemente oscuro, la idea jamás la había leído, pero esta perfectamente desarrollada, me encanta!!!
Es una historia fascinante
!!! I LOVE this idea! Although I think both Severus and Sirius are a bit OOC, I can understand how they got there due to the distress of missing their friends. I also like the Regulus connection. Although both the inferius Lily AND Tom Riddle's baby are a little creepy, I'll bite. I just have a little bit of confusion about how a dead body could have maintained a pregnancy, etc etc. That part is a little too far out for me. Great job and I am looking forward to seeing more. Following!
Yay to a new chapter. Loved. :)
| Title: Thinking it Through
| 13 Mar 2014 2:28 pm
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| Reviewer: YnxNyx (Signed)
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i have to admit i'm amazed. the twist is kinda sick - pregnant inferi and all - but you've managed to work up a believable way to connect Severus and Sirius and loose alot of the animosity that was between them.
i like what you've done with the parseltongue, changing the naming rules and such. it makes more sense since it was just the two boys, but then how did they learn to speak it anyway? some snakes from the forest taught them?
Love this story I can't wait for more
I am really interest to see how this family develops.
| Title: Thinking it Through
| 08 Mar 2014 11:01 am
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| Reviewer: projectjay (Anonymous)
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| Title: Thinking it Through
| 05 Mar 2014 2:15 pm
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| Reviewer: Eszther (Anonymous)
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What a lovely, unique plot. Maybe lovely is not the right turn of phrase but your story is very intrigueing. As for names - Harry could be Orion and Riddle jr. could be Jerome, shortened to Jerry as in Tom and Jerry ;)
| Title: Thinking it Through
| 05 Mar 2014 12:03 am
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| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed)
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Nice cover story! I am so glad that Snape can speak parseltongue. Too bad Harry hasn't been speaking English for the last couple of years. They will have a lot to teach those two boys. I am so glad that Snape and Sirius and putting down their differences!
Wow! I did NOT expect that! Truly a horror to have used Lily and have her as caretaker. Oh wow. Awful.
But great writing and idea!
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