Wow! What an amazingly creepy and heart-breaking beginning. I am so glad I don't need to wait for the next chapter to be published! *reading on...*
How did I miss this gem? Great story so far!
| Title: Lanuage Aquisition
| 03 Apr 2016 4:06 pm
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| Reviewer: retaco (Signed)
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funny so far... I like the new life... i'll be waiting for more
Reyes
| Title: Lanuage Aquisition
| 08 Mar 2016 1:42 pm
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| Reviewer: laraq (Signed)
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Such an intriguing story, I hope it hasn't been definitely abandoned.
I especially like Severus and Sirius working together to care for Harry and his little brother.
| Title: Lanuage Aquisition
| 17 Aug 2014 5:52 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Me encanta la personalidad que le has dado a tu Severus, y yo realmente estoy apreciando la interacción de todos,
aunque es confuso la forma de hablar de Orion, pero entiendo el por qué
en fin,
buen capítulo
| Title: Lanuage Aquisition
| 17 Aug 2014 5:12 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a good chapter.
| Title: Lanuage Aquisition
| 16 Aug 2014 11:19 pm
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| Reviewer: bianca (Anonymous)
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Ahahaha! I loved this chapter!
| Title: Goodbye Lily
| 01 Apr 2014 4:56 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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| Title: Goodbye Lily
| 30 Mar 2014 3:57 pm
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| Reviewer: Kendra Dhyanna (Anonymous)
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Wow!!!
Creo que es lo único que se me pasa por la cabeza ahora, wow!!
Es uno de los mejores capítulos que he leído en mi vida, la inclusión de "El que abre los caminos" fue sencillamente impresionante
Me robaste algunas lágrimas,
y me dejaste anonada
Felicitaciones
| Title: A Moment for Reflection
| 22 Mar 2014 5:36 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely chapter I love the description of Hagrid holding them apart! Thank you
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