Oh my gosh, that was utterly unexpected
| Title: Chapter 3: A Potion's Professor
| 24 Aug 2023 6:11 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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| Title: Chapter 2: A Rather Appropriate Turn of Events
| 24 Aug 2023 6:06 pm
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Brent needs to get what’s coming to him. He’s awful and he knows it. I like that Draco has a conscience. The window spell is a clever idea.
| Title: Chapter 1: Draco's Expectations
| 24 Aug 2023 5:58 pm
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| Reviewer: cavehack (Signed)
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Great first chapter! I definitely want to read more. Though poor Harry and poor feline.
I'm not sure if you'll return to this seeing as it's been years since you last updated, but I'd love to see more! I love your characterization of Snape and the relationship you developed between Harry and the kids. Very charming ocs you've made!!
This was an engaging read! Your plot and story were markedly superior in the sense that they stand very well on their own. Thank you for sharing! Hopefully you'll pursue the story further!
| Title: Chapter 13: A New Hope
| 14 Jan 2018 10:53 am
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an excellent chapter as always. I love Draco, he is such a complicated character and you are doing justice to those complications!
Shocking, hm, I will be waiting. I don't know, but was this update a bit faster than the others?
Anyway, Draco, I never despised him, more like.... pity. But you are the one who made me fall in love with him, you write, and I will say it again, you write very beautifully.
Do you have any published books? I would love to read them.
Some lines that you add, they make chills go up my spine, in this chapter, that line was, "A truly powerful wizard could kill with a whisper."
But to this date, my favourite remains the one and only, ".....when people speak of me, they only mention how many times I've walked away from you."
Anyway, yes I scavenged the whole story again to look for this sentence, and I think I am gonna re read the whole story ow.
This is a truly magnificent story and I am totally in love with it.
So, now, Draco knows about Horcrxes? Hm, that should be interesting, I love how you portray Draco.
I am guessing that Lizzy and Parker still don't know that their mother is dead? Do they? I am dreading the confrontation almost more than Harry.
Waiting for the next update! Keep writing! Lots of love!
Happy New Year!
I did.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review, hope you enjoy the new chapter!
Be careful Draco!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! :D
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