| Title: Chapter 30 A holiday goes awry
| 04 Nov 2015 10:41 pm
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| Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed)
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I quite enjoyed your haunting vignette with the man in the cemetery
| Title: Chapter 29 An ordinary vacation trip
| 04 Nov 2015 10:27 pm
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| Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed)
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Oh god I love this story, it's so creative and full of life!
| Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects
| 02 Nov 2015 10:55 pm
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| Reviewer: aurtrina (Signed)
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Ahh! Good story. Looking forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks a lot! Next chapter's up now :-)
Wonderful story you have here!
Author's Response: Thank you!
| Title: 17 The Double Knight’s Spiral Battle Move
| 29 Oct 2015 5:24 pm
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| Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed)
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I love the drama in this and all subsequent chapters!
Author's Response: Great! I'm glad that you do and happy for your reviews :-) It's lovely to have a new reader discover the story!
Wow. I didn't see that coming. Very exciting chapter. I'll be looking forward to finding out what happens next.
Author's Response: Snape's past is cathing up with him once again... Thanks for the review, more to come soon!
Rather convenient timing for Dumbles to be waking up again, indeed. *grumbles about twinkly-eyed interfering fools*
I'm not sure how I feel about this one, tbh. I just don't really buy it, I suppose. Like, maybe I'm just in denial or something, but I feel like if I use a fingernail to scratch at the veneer, as it were, something else will reveal itself...
A good update, in any case, even if current situation has me disgruntled with just about everyone involved.
Author's Response: Thank you for taking your time to write a review even in the middle of disgruntledness :-) Action is a rather difficult genre to write, I think - or it simply does not agree with me, specifically. I needed something drastic to happen in the story, though - a crisis to bring Harry and Snape closer together. It doesn't look like that right now, but bear with it another chapter or two and I hope it will make more sense.
| Title: Chapter 43 Awakening of inanimate objects
| 29 Oct 2015 1:53 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a strange turn of events!
Author's Response: Strange, yes I know - I needed a little action to animate the story. It easily gets a bit weird though - the action genre is not as straight forward as you'd like to think...
| Title: Chapter 7 Seven Avada Kedavras
| 29 Oct 2015 11:29 am
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| Reviewer: Reader629 (Signed)
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This chapter was magnificent
| Title: Chapter 1 Postwar at the Burrow
| 29 Oct 2015 5:35 am
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I have to say this is the first time I've read a beginning like this, and I was completely drawn in by your writing style and originality
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