| Title: Chapter 41 Withdrawal
| 16 Oct 2015 2:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Excellent chapter! A sense of irony over the offer of Grimmauld Place Sirus' old home being used by Severus as a hiding place!
Author's Response: I agree... about the irony :-)
Lots happening in this chapter. I liked that Harry offered Snape a refuge if he was found guilty and had to escape. Ginny sounds like she is really messed up. I wondered if ignoring or forgetting all her problems would work out. I hope Severus gets some kind of support for his trial. Looking forward to finding out.
Author's Response: Please find out in chapter 42 :-)
Great update! I really like Harry's way of revising - very unique, and probably more effective for many, I would think.
Ah, but Snape ought to be more optimistic. What am I saying. This is Snape, after all. Things will somehow come round right, though. They have to. At least, I hope they have to in the end!
Well writ.
Author's Response: You were right, of course! Things did come round (read chapter 42), or someone came round, although Snape seems to find it hard to accept...
| Title: Chapter 41 Withdrawal
| 15 Oct 2015 7:41 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWatr5 (Anonymous)
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Loved how Harry talked to Snape.
Author's Response: Thank you. Snape is clearly disturbed by Harry's wish to help him, though, even more so in the next chapter...
| Title: Chapter 40 The Ball
| 11 Oct 2015 2:42 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you a great chapter
Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews - it was nice to hear from you again!
| Title: Chapter 39 Luna less loony
| 11 Oct 2015 2:11 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you an interesting chapter
| Title: Chapter 38 The Inquiry
| 11 Oct 2015 2:00 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very good court scene thank you
| Title: Chapter 33 Angst, Oblivion and Regrets
| 09 Oct 2015 9:18 pm
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| Reviewer: JCJ58 (Signed)
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I have been reading your story for 2 days, and am really enjoying it, but I do have to say, I just really don't like Ginny much. She's not my favorite character in cannon either, but she's just really selfesh and kind of hateful.
Author's Response: Hmm... I know that several readers are not happy with this Ginny, and I neither can nor do I want to defend her, but I think that she is more immature than hateful. I'm glad that you're enjoying the story :-)
Ack, not good! The good Healer's testimony is rather important. Granted, were it not, he wouldn't have been abducted. I hope he'll be all right. :(
Another good update. I look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you. The story is going to turn a bit more adventurous towards the end. I'm trying to build up the suspense with Healer Frankiss abduction...
| Title: Chapter 40 The Ball
| 07 Oct 2015 11:29 am
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Loved the introduction of murderous owls and black letters as well as the young people's ball.
Author's Response: Great! More to come...
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