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Title: The First Step 30 Jun 2010 12:47 am
Reviewer: Jo (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Fantastic!1 You're a riveting writer. I've enjoyed reading both parts. Thanks.
Title: False Friendship 19 Sep 2008 3:58 am
Reviewer: Bourtreehillian (Signed) [Report This]
    I LOVE this story! Malfoy is a little ooc, however... it comes naturally, seeing how everything developed. Well done. Ron is my absolute favourite in this.

    Author's Response:

    Many thanks.  Yes, you're right about Malfoy.  If I were writing this fic now I'd do him a bit differently, but this was my first ever fanfic and I was concentrating on Harry.  Poor Ron, I tend to use him as a fall-guy - somehow he asks for it.

Title: Potions 19 Sep 2008 3:24 am
Reviewer: Bourtreehillian (Signed) [Report This]
    Good chapter. Ron is cracking me up.
Title: The New Term 19 Sep 2008 3:00 am
Reviewer: Bourtreehillian (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG, where is this going? I am enthralled.
Title: A Change of Image 19 Sep 2008 2:32 am
Reviewer: Bourtreehillian (Signed) [Report This]
    This story is great. I love Ron being a Star Trek fan and... the hexed telly is hilarious. :D
Title: The First Step 07 Sep 2008 7:29 pm
Reviewer: waterleaves (Signed) [Report This]
    Haha very interesting ending! I liked the piece and I was really worried at first until I realized there would be a sequel! Excellent! I like the way you threw in the detail about Fawkes and why a feather wouldn't work!

    Author's Response: I wasn't intending to write a sequel when I wrote this one, but once I had got the fanfic bug I couldn't help myself.  I did 7 sequels in the end (most of them are on ffnet cos they don't fit into the P&S categories).  Thanks for the review.
Title: The First Step 24 Aug 2008 2:04 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    Boy, you really made me dislike Harry in this story. Even knowing that James had treated the letter parchment with the Obligatus curse still makes me feel as negatively about him as Severus must.
Title: Another Bloomin' Birthday 24 Aug 2008 12:46 am
Reviewer: trust severus spy (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked your throwaway line about the last line of "Rule Britannia". I don't believe most Americans know the lyrics. Here they are:

    Rule Britannia!
    Britannia rules the waves!
    Britons never never never shall be slaves!

    THAT'S why "Harry often wondered if the Dursleys had ever sung the words, ESPECIALLY THE LAST LINE." (Emphasis mine, obviously!)

    Author's Response: Glad you picked up on that detail.  I often throw in references and if people notice them it enriches the story (I hope) and if they don't, then it doesn't really matter.   Thanks for the reviews.
Title: A Change of Image 17 Oct 2006 7:37 pm
Reviewer: Rezallia (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hermione is a biznitch in this chapter... however, I like this so far.
Title: The First Step 30 Sep 2005 1:51 am
Reviewer: khaosfire (Anonymous) [Report This]
    ... I ::really:: liked chapters one through twelve.

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