Title: Chapter 5
| 10 Mar 2015 2:23 pm
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Reviewer: tb_ll57 (Anonymous)
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This feels like the perfect missing piece from the books! I had never really thought much about Minerva being at the school, it was so glossed over in favour of Harry's plot. Very interesting details and such a great portrayal of Severus. I look forward to reading the next parts of the series!
Title: Chapter 5
| 10 Feb 2015 5:16 pm
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Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Good detailed, emotional speech by Snape! And really cool that Phineas Nigellus Black makes an appearance! I'll look forward to the future stories to see how this plays out.
Title: Chapter 2
| 10 Feb 2015 2:52 pm
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Reviewer: shadowienne (Anonymous)
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Not trying to be overly picky, but a corpse is a dead body-- it is not capable of experiencing pain.
I'm interested in your approach to the Seventh Year, since I haven't read other stories dealing with the Hogwarts point of view to that time frame. Especially interested to see Snape in action! (As well as his thoughts and feelings.)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! And thanks for pointing out the corpse-thing. I'm not a native speaker and sometimes I tend to choose the wrong word when it is close to the "right" word in my own language. You are very welcome to be picky about my texts - I appreciate it!
Title: Chapter 5
| 06 Feb 2015 2:40 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Title: Chapter 4
| 06 Feb 2015 2:29 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 3
| 06 Feb 2015 2:26 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 2
| 06 Feb 2015 2:21 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1
| 06 Feb 2015 2:19 pm
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Very impressive thank you
Title: Chapter 5
| 05 Feb 2015 11:13 am
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Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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great!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Title: Chapter 1
| 02 Feb 2015 3:44 pm
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Reviewer: gwen (Anonymous)
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Really impressed this is original and plotty i always wanted a fic with snape during his time as headmaster, keep going Also the occlumency bit is good
Author's Response: Thank you! Occlumency is an intriguing phenomenon, isn't it?
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