| Title: Two years
| 03 Dec 2015 11:54 am
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| Reviewer: Magdalena Wieder (Anonymous)
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Ah I am so happy about the new Chapter ^^ I am looking forward to more Harry/Severus Interaction :) keep going!
This was really good. :) I thoroughly enjoyed the conversation between Severus and Albus. :) The line that Albus would never turn Severus away was the best. I can't wait to see what happens next!! :)
Wow!!!
Esto fue un capítulo sorprendente. Realmente impresionante, he amado cada diálogo de los personajes
Brillante!!!
| Title: Two years
| 01 Dec 2015 6:04 pm
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| Reviewer: BlueWater5 (Anonymous)
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Loved the conversation between Severus and Albus.
WOW! What an amazing chapter!
You're right, I do love chapters with Harry/Snape interaction. But I almost loved this chapter even more because I wasn't expecting such great Albus/Snape interaction - it's very rare that I enjoy reading those two together as much as I did in your update.
Absolutely fantastic. Love the mentor/father role that you've given to Albus, and I really hope we see more of that in the story!
| Title: Two years
| 01 Dec 2015 2:49 pm
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| Reviewer: Yo (Anonymous)
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YES ! I wasn't so sure about your story at the beginning of it, but the more you write, the more I love it ! Thanks for this chapter, the conversation between Albus and Severus sounds very right, well done !
I loved the conversation between Severus and Albus, although I do have a question...
Did Severus rape Lily? Or was it a one night stand or something? From the way you described it, it sounded as though she was upset with him after, but you didn't go into detail. Did James know?
Author's Response: Hi. Thanks for your question, NO Severus did not rape Lily. He did, however, take advantage of the fact that she was drunk. Lily was upset with him, but mostly I think it was awkward for her afterward, and she wanted to make things very clear, both to James and Severus. Yes, James knew. Lily told him immediately. I couldn't find a way to make all that clear enough in this chapter without breaking the flow, though it's clearer in earlier chapters.
I'm glad you like the chapter. Thanks for reviewing.
| Title: You lied!
| 18 Nov 2015 11:59 am
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| Reviewer: Jessica (Anonymous)
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Another brilliant chapter, I'm really enjoying this story.
I'm so glad Severus has taken Harry away from the Dursleys, I'm just waiting to see Dumbledores reaction.
| Title: You lied!
| 12 Nov 2015 1:48 pm
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Lovely although I did like Severus popping into the muggle world!
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